Player Comments on Test Run - NEVER USE JOE CHIN'S CHAINS!!

This is horrible.

I can tell it's not finished. Nobody likes unfinished storygames. Before publishing, make sure it's actually finished.

I like the concept of someone learning the guitar. It would've been a nice concept. Although, it was really hard to figure that out. You should've worked on the execution more. Then, it would've been a decent storygame.

1/8.

This is the worst storygame I have ever read. PLease unpublish this.

Never have I seen a game with 1/8 for every rating. But I do have to agree with the others, it does seem unfinished. The goal is a little bit confusing, too. How exactly would one make a guitar out of a tree with a chainsaw and some singing? Anyway, it could be better with some work. You just joined 4 days ago, give it some more time and you could make a great game.

There seems to be no point at all. I wasted almost two minutes of my life on this.

Unfinished demos are usually unpublished, but this seems like a complete game? For what little is here anyway. Did you just forget to change the title?

Anyway, you made an account, wrote this in like thirty minutes without looking at any other stories on the site, then published as soon as it let you. This will probably be unpublished by the end of the day for low ratings.

If you'd added some more actual writing in those two days this could've been a (still tiny) but passable game. Aim for at least 2000 words in the next one because that is essentially the minimum for a story with any kind of branching or plot.

WTF? THIS PAGE IS NOT DESIGNED TO PUBLISHED UNFINISHED GAMES. Have you ever read the warnings about publishing? Thanks for the free point, Here you have your one