Player Comments on The Kinda Weird Day

This is not how stories are written.
Apart from having a plot equivalent to the song Friday you should not write your speakers as:
Friend: Y/N do you think this?
You: Because your linguistically challenged.
It's a writing site for ******* sake, surely stories with plots, named characters and properly presented dialogue is not asking for much, it should be the minimum standard rather than something fan-fic writers, WC fans and the guy who likes Spiderman hope to be able to do one day :D
With an actual story I think maybe you'd do pretty well.

— Will11 on 5/10/2015 12:18:23 AM with a score of 0

This is trash (sorry)

— The_Broken_God on 6/3/2019 12:05:46 PM with a score of 0

Uhm... okay... it's pretty weird bro. 3/8

— RoyalGhost_007 on 5/19/2015 7:37:40 AM with a score of 0

You have too die. To die is not fun.

— tiger9 on 5/11/2015 4:58:03 PM with a score of 0

Any way to live or is all the endings death?

— _Zomby_ on 5/11/2015 8:56:11 AM with a score of 0

Funny, but its "" When someone talks.

3/8

— NightmareBonnie on 5/10/2015 11:04:06 AM with a score of 0

Peanut butter attack?!?!?

— Lifefur on 5/10/2015 10:46:57 AM with a score of 0

... I can't even say something funny here. This is just a terrible game, period.

— Kiel_Farren on 5/10/2015 12:21:01 AM with a score of 0

This was extremely short and kinda confusing. Every ending is just going home to find your mother has consumed all of your penut butter spread. Now, while this event would be traumatising to all who experience it, making it into a game is a little overboard.

I apologise if this event happened to you and you are in emotional and physical pain because of it and as thus you needed to express yourself through this game, but I think that you should keep this game unpublished, at least until the police arrive and you are able to further expand.

— AngelOfThatThing on 5/9/2015 11:42:56 PM with a score of 0

NOOO NOT THE PENUT BUTTER NOOOOOO *cries*

— jayfeather808 on 5/9/2015 10:54:07 PM with a score of 0

I'm sad that I already used my "go shit a lightsaber" line.

— jamescoker1226 on 5/9/2015 10:52:12 PM with a score of 0

Read this right after Cryptode when I had five minutes to kill. This game fails even in producing shock value, and that's already the best thing it has to offer.

— Aconc on 5/9/2015 10:33:44 PM with a score of 0

IF your inspiration for making this was those funny random stories in this website and that you're trying to coppy them. Well I think you failed miserably.
However, i don't think this is a complete and utter hopeless story. No not all, i think there might actually be potential in you.

— Penworth on 5/9/2015 9:48:16 PM with a score of 0

A non-sense game. Not funny at all.

— Raven47 on 5/9/2015 6:50:28 PM with a score of 0

da fak

— 13Swellendam on 5/9/2015 3:27:06 PM with a score of 0

I don't care much for buttered peanuts.

— BradinDvorak on 5/9/2015 2:36:54 PM with a score of 0