Player Comments on The Knight

...Whah?...

There is not enough explanations, in this game, for example which time line is it going on in? It is also, way to short it took me 2 min to finish, but besides that i like the idea, and the start is quite good it just needs a bit more text.

do finish this game.

Im so fucking confused.

Awesome Does NOT Approve!
First of all, I give this a low rating for the lack of pages. This is usually a mistake most new writers make, and never bother to fix. This story was incredibly short, and I finished within a minute. Another thing. Add more detail to the pages. Yes, I'm a knight, but I only know this from the title. Eating and sleeping aren't really important, and don't affect the player in any way. An expanded story with more links would be enough for a higher rating.
1/8

Meh. 3/8.

This isn't even a backbone of a story, this is the last line in the lower spine that is so small and vestigial.

Way to linear try to expand your horizons and make it longer. It wouldn't hurt to make it a bit more expanded. But it's a good first attempt.

Complete the story before releasing it.

your off to a good start, keep at it

This would be fine if the first few pages of fluff were deleted and the story was actually finished.