Player Comments on The Soul Adventure of Grobyc Dior Fortree

Purge this out of here. PLEASE!

— Jimmysutton on 3/31/2016 10:08:21 AM with a score of 0

I think I'm just going to start commenting my rating and then briefly explaining why I rated it as I did.
1/8
Why?-I just didn't like it, plus there's quite a bit of errors.

— DeathIncarnate on 8/31/2015 6:14:18 PM with a score of 0

To transverse yourself, you have to learn alchemy.
But can alchemy answer questions like:

Why is an Edokko named Grobyc? Nearly every character in this seems to have been named by drawing handfuls of Scrabble tiles.

What was the point of all that horrible SHOUTING poetry about the deer? I never even met a deer, just a girl that I got down from the wall "somehow" who told me way too much about alchemy.

Who is Master Viper, and why was I "somehow" "suddenly" transported to his alternate dimension for a few lines of cryptic dialogue?

What the heck does "transverse yourself" mean, anyway?

— Sethaniel on 5/27/2015 3:47:22 PM with a score of 0

This is terrible and boring. The grammar just gets worse as you go along and there are so few choices. What's up with the completely useless alchemy page?

— Karis on 5/27/2015 3:30:10 PM with a score of 0

I think this story might be guilty of plagiarism with that alchemy page. I have to give it a 1/8 because of that, as well as a very poorly executed plot and grammar issues.

— LeoScales7 on 9/1/2014 1:03:21 PM with a score of 0

Spelling was bad, grammar was bad, plot was confusing and pretty-much non-existent.

— TCcrew on 7/29/2014 3:31:28 PM with a score of 0

... This is terrible...

— Tanstaafl on 10/14/2013 7:19:13 PM with a score of 0

I do want to weep. N jke. 1/8

— Killer999 on 9/21/2011 1:20:59 PM with a score of 0

This game has to many one choices!!!!!!!

— Danzis on 8/30/2011 9:18:39 PM with a score of 0

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Linear

— ThisisBo on 6/19/2011 12:05:35 AM with a score of 0

It is very linear. You should create more paths for the reader to take so it is more like a choose your own adventure. I thought your writing was good, but you might want to look at your grammar.

— SoarHighBeFree on 4/20/2010 1:05:09 AM with a score of 0

Man. that was sooo terrible. Good concept

— Jimi on 10/8/2007 8:18:32 PM with a score of 0

Pretty good job

— th*mage*of*kings on 10/8/2007 4:35:54 PM with a score of 0

Grobyc is Cyborg spelled backwards... this would be good for mystery/sci-fi, but think up something original...

— Rommel on 3/29/2007 5:51:21 AM with a score of 0

Doesn't seem to be that finished. It is far too linear. Did you copy and paste that stuff on alchemy?

— October on 10/28/2006 5:10:26 AM with a score of 0

I think there might have been a pretty good story in there, but it reads like you translated it from another language.

— Sethaniel on 10/23/2006 10:27:23 AM with a score of 0

Creative but riddled with run-on sentences, poor grammar, and terrible poems. The best writing was cut and pasted from some book on Alchemy. When the writing makes the story confusing, you know it's time to go back and edit.

— madglee on 9/3/2006 1:05:31 PM with a score of 0

OK so it wasn't exactly Mattias Material but I can do better and I will

— Silver_Lake on 8/9/2006 11:21:54 PM with a score of 0

"You look around and see yourself in an a time void like thingy" -- Silver_Lake

Great description buddy.

— JJJ-thebanisher on 8/2/2006 3:35:47 AM with a score of 0

good start. solid story, just keep working at it. more choices and adventure would be all you really need to work on.

— nate on 6/29/2006 4:25:22 PM with a score of 0

To linear and I have a feeling that many parts or that is stolen. It's also a lot worse that Mattias.

— Havacoman on 6/28/2006 12:59:12 AM with a score of 0

Yeah JJJ is right,this is nowhere near Mattias, I never could make a better game then JJJ,and Silver_Lake Can't,and this is copied also, I forgot to say!

— simpsons on 6/27/2006 2:05:00 PM with a score of 0

BETTER THEN MATTIAS? YEAH RIGHT, DUMBASS. I told you it wouldn't be better then mattias. AND you didn't even make it all by yourself. The whole alchemy thing was obviously copied. Next time write something as good as you say it will be. (Mods -- donmt delete this comment, him and I have a running history in which I bet him 500 points that e couldn't make a better game then Mattias the one knight)