Player Comments on The Story of Rebecca's Life

omg.... i have never laughed harder. DO THIS STORY, PPL. DO IT NOW.

Endings were abrupt and random/illogical. It's probably not a good idea to write stuff when you're basically asleep.

Confusing and non-sensical. The random nature of this game ultimately leads to a lack of immersion and a loss of interest in the events of the story. When an event happens then another event happens that does not correlate to the event that just happened or to the story as a whole, then it becomes boring because the plot is not moving in a meaningful way. All events that happen in the story should contribute something meaningful; character development, story progression, world building, etc. A lot of the scenes that happen in this story were random filler that was not funny, things happening that do not abide by the laws of our world is not funny. This is boring, random drivel that the author should have written when they were well-rested and not vulnerable to writing a story in which the events do not add up together to a satisfying conclusion.

confused

Not bad at all, very random but it was enjoyable.

Were you feeling ok when you wrote this? Perhaps you were intoxicated? Seriously wtf.

Oddly this is not the weirdest thing I have ever read, I've actually read much, much, much weirder(Usually from Endmaster) but still this story was... different... not terrible...not necessarily good either...I didn't really understand what was happening though the events were pretty odd.

Very... random. And a bit pointless. And perhaps you should get some sleep...

No.
Please no

Totally Random and full of Unicorn-ness

Run... Far Away From This!

Very, very confusing.

NOt really fun

I was kind of confused...

Ah,A fun giggly kinda choose your own....meh.

stuuuuuupid

JJJ and Zikara are right. No further comment.

Wasn't super impressed overall. I pretty much have the same problems with it as JJJ does, but aside from all of that the writing itself sometimes gets very repetitive, which makes it seem very sloppy. Rebecca's a animator doing animation things, amazing her friends with her amazing talents? You need to be wary of this sort of thing and reread your work (maybe once you've gotten some sleep) so that you can spot these things and fix them.

Doesn't make a lot of sense which leads to essentially no immersion