Player Comments on What if you died but didn't really die

im gonna change the name im using and this game is way too short i mean seriously why did the trampoline break anyways? it just doesn't make sense it also doesn't make sense that there even WAS a trampoline there in the first place and stuff and yeah and why was there a wolf there?

I despise anyone who puts an emoticon in any formal piece of writing. Take some pride in your work, boy.

it had almost no effort put into it

Two games in one day? Put in a little more effort! "Look, a random cliff!" XD

It could definitely use a few more paragraphs, but it was mildly entertaining for such a short game :)

To be honest, I'm not sure what I've just read. It looked a bit like a story, but it only had like four pages and eight sentences. There also wasn't that much of a plot, character development, pacing or any other characteristics of a story. And the little bits that there were, were way too random. I think I'm just going to classify this as 'semi-story'.

I've given your game a 2/8, because it did have some choices and something of a plot. However, it wasn't a good story.

Good luck writing!

I died

Wait...what?
Is that the end?
Um I'm kind of confused....?

... ?

Hmm...okay. A bit odd, but it's nice to see some consistency in the backstory. Still, very short and low in quality.

Are you from Kenya cause Kenya not?