Player Comments on Zombie town

This wasn't very good sadly. Umm, maybe next time (if there is a next time from you) put forth a bit more effort in your story game..?

The amount of time and effort spent on this really shows in this game. Obviously neither time nor effort was put into this--more like you write this in five minutes and waited for the time minumum to pass before you could publish this. It was also as bland as a sheet of paper. No taste, nothing of interest in it. I suggest you take the time and effort to create a piece worth reading.

I also took more time writing this extremely helpful comment than you did with this story. Please unpublish this before it gets taken down by the moderators. Or just wait, either one.

Will spent more effort writing a comment on your game than you spent on this storygame. Please put effort into your work because clearly you aren't.

If you honestly consider this it's not very good is it? The main problem is it's brevity, one sentence per page is just not enough, also there are grammar errors, no named characters, very little plot and a rather vague setting. This will be deleted for failing to meet minimum site quality standards. If you're serious about writing use multiple sentences, named characters, plot development, correct spelling and grammar and try taking yourself seriously by using a user name that no one over the age of 7 would find particularly amusing. On the bright side there's a galaxy sized space for improvement here :D

Please put more effort into your work.

I was going to mock this a little, but why waste time with such low hanging fruit.

To the author, I'm sorry but there's absolutely nothing worthwhile about this, and your name isn't as funny as you think it is. Please put some effort into your next attempt. This one will be removed.