DaCaRi, The Contributor

Member Since

5/22/2014

Last Activity

6/1/2018 12:34 AM

EXP Points

104

Post Count

96

Storygame Count

0

Duel Stats

1 win / 4 losses

Order

Marauder

Commendations

0

I got a great, sometimes scary imagination. Unfortunately I lack the focus to channel that into a story game. I mean I could say screw it and pump out some rushed garbage like everyone else new to writing, but I don't want to get my fragile feelings hurt by all you meanie critics. So yeah you probably won't see too many story games published by me. But I will be reading the hell outta all of y'all's stories. I may not have the talent to write something myself, but I am very talented at reading. If you need a proof reader, or want to beta test a new story, just give me a shout. I'll be more than happy to help.

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points

Storygames

A Myth's Resurrection
unpublished

Dragon Soul

**This will be more story than game.**

Your name is Tresor, and you're a pirate and treasure hunter. You are constantly looking for the next big score, trying to build up your riches enough to retire to a quiet life. That is how you ended up on a ship headed to the most dangerous part of the sea.

Everyone has heard the tales about the treasure that can be found on the Isle of the Damned, protected my an unending storms that make it impossible to reach. Mountains of gold, more than any one man can spend if he lived a thousand years.

Unfortunately, like most tales, there is more to this one than you know. Will you find the fortune you seek? Or will you be consumed by the storm, and perish in obscurity?


Recent Posts

How to deal with stupid people?!? on 5/31/2018 11:07:07 PM

I feel like you are too angry of a person. Do you need a hug? Hugs are scientifically proven to make people less angry. That, or you need to go eat a snickers bar. I get a bit testy when hungry as well.


How to deal with stupid people?!? on 5/31/2018 11:00:24 PM

A very valid point there. My comment did nothing to add to the discussion, aside from noting my pleasure at being back.


How to deal with stupid people?!? on 5/31/2018 10:52:42 PM

But I just got back, and am enjoying reading the forums. I also seriously need to write this story that I completely forgot about til I got back and saw it.


How to deal with stupid people?!? on 5/31/2018 10:49:56 PM

Lmao why did I leave cys? The forums are a good source of entertaining verbal smack downs of plebs who make poor choices of where to post there problems.


I need some tips on focusing on my story. on 5/31/2018 10:42:05 PM

I'm back again, hopefully for much longer, and I have decided to try and work on my story. The thing is though that I can't seem to keep focused on it. I mean it has been almost 2 years since I brainstormed on this idea, and it still isn't past the first page. 

What do you guys do to stay focused that may be of help to me?


Fresh Meat - baiting and hooking thread on 5/31/2018 10:30:41 PM

Marauders rule!!!!


Fresh Meat - baiting and hooking thread on 5/31/2018 10:12:39 PM

Do you know what I appreciate about you @mizal? Your timing. I log in for the first time in like 2 years, and I see this post. This post speaks to me deeply, because I am always showing up, hanging out for a bit, and then disappearing again back into the aether. I still haven't finished that story we spoke about, if you even remember me lol.


Draw My Attention (New Age of Sage) on 2/23/2017 4:33:39 PM

Makes me wonder what it was I put. All I put was regular letters and symbols.


Draw My Attention (New Age of Sage) on 2/23/2017 4:28:13 PM

Ok that's really starting to get annoying. Anyone know why question marks keep popping up randomly whenever I post something?


Draw My Attention (New Age of Sage) on 2/23/2017 4:26:48 PM

Recommendation 4

A Magical Tale Recommending for unpublishing. ?

Reason: ?Dead link, spelling errors, grammatical errors, iffy plot, and poor dialog. There is also very little details to help you choose what to do next. The biggest issue is the broken link. In order to find it the path you must follow is, you follow, approach the cottage, you tell them the truth, dash to the portal, change your mind and jump back, run to the door kicking the witches, The broken link is going to be "try to escape." If you click on it, it just keeps cycling back on itself.