MysteriousPresence, The Reader

Member Since

7/15/2015

Last Activity

3/7/2019 12:37 PM

EXP Points

92

Post Count

13

Storygame Count

0

Duel Stats

0 wins / 1 loss

Order

Sage

Commendations

0

Just some guy reading stories.

Storygames

Do Not Stumble
unpublished

Something about thieves or something


The Fields of War
unpublished

A story set during the Napoleonic era in an alternate world. Me and my friends started this project some months ago but we never really got around to finishing it. We are publishing it now just to see what you guys think of the parts of the story that are finished. This was our first experience at writing for the website. Perhaps we will complete it in the future if we feel inspired. If we are breaking any rules of any kind by publishing an unfinished game, please let us know. Thanks.


Recent Posts

The Fields of War on 5/17/2017 10:03:15 PM

Thanks. Still kind of unfamiliar with the rules of publishing on this website.


The Fields of War on 5/17/2017 1:47:38 PM

Hi, guys!

           So a while back me and some friends started on an ambitious story called "The Fields of War." It was a tale with a backdrop of a Napoleonic-like world. Heavy influences for the structure and style of the story came from stories like "Eternal" by EndMaster and "The Order of the Midnight Sun" by JJJ-thebanisher. Life eventually caught up to us and we eventually lost our drive to work on the story, much less finish it. So I decided to just publish the story so that I could see a reaction to what we did finish. Please be honest if you read it, don't sugarcoat anything. At the same time, please don't troll and just give overly negative comments that do not have a basis. We want honest tips or comments. Thanks!

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-fields-of-war


Writing Advice on 1/30/2017 9:54:39 PM

Thanks for the advice.


Writing Advice on 1/30/2017 8:47:28 PM

Thanks guys.


Writing Advice on 1/30/2017 8:43:48 PM

How long should a small story be?


Writing Advice on 1/30/2017 8:38:53 PM

So I'm planning on making this story of mine based on the Napoleonic Wars but I'm not really an experienced writer. Should I just go for it and write the story or should I release a few smaller stories before I make it just to get some experience and maybe recognition?


Eternal Discussion on 7/29/2016 8:41:20 PM

Also, I recently found out that the Death God is the Necromancer from "Necromancer." 

Holy shit.


Eternal Discussion on 7/29/2016 8:39:28 PM

What's his real name?


Eternal Discussion on 7/29/2016 8:39:13 PM

I swear, you guys have at least one post in every forum, I see you guys all the time.

Not that that's a bad thing.


Eternal Discussion on 7/24/2016 5:35:17 AM

I haven't seen any discussions about EndMaster's "Eternal" yet so I made a thread to discuss it.

What was your favorite path and ending? What are your thoughts on the Eternal? Did you dislike any aspects of the story?