331 Oakmount Drive
, #5 for
played 23,917 times (finished 1,788)
"trek through the forest"
"Not going to lose any sleep"
"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.
Another day, another house to clean... but something is definitely wrong with this house.....
This was very good. I really enjoyed the horror and overall feeling of this story. The writing was quite descriptive and lively, and clearly plenty of effort was put into making this quite a thrilling experience.
I liked the unwitting horror premise, and there's so many ways to meet your demise in this game that winning was both a challenge and quite fulfilling in the end. I started this with already good expectations, but I'm happy to say that this story did a fantastic job in succeeding my previous expectations.
Needless to say, I rated this quite highly and I can see why this storygame is regarded well, as it's quite entertaining.
Bravo on crafting a very spooky but enjoyable horror storygame. ^_^
on 3/21/2017 6:36:54 AM
Wow... somehow, I ended up getting the exact same ending that I got the first time I played this game, a million years ago! I guess I was so caught up in the story I didn't even notice! The writing is PERFECT--not too long and redundant, but with enough detail to keep you hooked--the choices are good, and, overall, I'd say this is definitely the best horror game on the site!
on 12/2/2008 10:47:11 PM
This game is fantastic. It's in the classic "choose your own adventure" format, is exciting, well written, and has an original (scary!) story. Very impressive. Congrats.
on 6/12/2007 12:45:17 PM
The story is... okay. The characters seem to have had quite a bit of care put into them and depth. But, suffice to say that their dialogue is very cringe-worthy at points. It doesn't seem very real and the horror aspects of the story seem rushed and predictable. Speaking of rushed, the pacing is not the best. The story goes from 0-100 real quickly instead of transitioning slowly towards, for example, a chase scene. I had no idea what was going on because all of the sudden Mr. Alexander was evil. In stories like this you need to give time to develop a character, especially the antagonist. You never gave a reason to fear him.
Anyways this review is more of a rant so it isn't exactly organized, but I hope the author of this story had improved from the feedback given when this story first came to be.
on 12/14/2018 10:37:52 AM
Clap clap clap. Very good game but it only took me around 10 minutes to find the good ending. It succeeded in making me feel frightened even with the overdone brutal murderer plot.
-- Szy on 11/4/2018 8:39:10 AM
Oh, I died! Very fun story.
on 9/1/2018 4:58:15 PM
Great story! it's good at keeping you wanting to read on and go back to find other endings! you put in a lot of effort into this and it shows. Good job!
-- lisha on 8/21/2018 4:51:57 AM
This is really good. Wish I knew how to actually make one.
on 6/14/2018 4:18:36 PM
It was alright
on 3/3/2018 1:15:15 PM
Very enjoyable, and I wish you made more than just this one story!!
on 3/1/2018 8:47:07 AM
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