331 Oakmount Drive
, #5 for
played 22,139 times (finished 1,675)
"trek through the forest"
"Not going to lose any sleep"
"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.
Another day, another house to clean... but something is definitely wrong with this house.....
This was very good. I really enjoyed the horror and overall feeling of this story. The writing was quite descriptive and lively, and clearly plenty of effort was put into making this quite a thrilling experience.
I liked the unwitting horror premise, and there's so many ways to meet your demise in this game that winning was both a challenge and quite fulfilling in the end. I started this with already good expectations, but I'm happy to say that this story did a fantastic job in succeeding my previous expectations.
Needless to say, I rated this quite highly and I can see why this storygame is regarded well, as it's quite entertaining.
Bravo on crafting a very spooky but enjoyable horror storygame. ^_^
on 3/21/2017 6:36:54 AM
Wow... somehow, I ended up getting the exact same ending that I got the first time I played this game, a million years ago! I guess I was so caught up in the story I didn't even notice! The writing is PERFECT--not too long and redundant, but with enough detail to keep you hooked--the choices are good, and, overall, I'd say this is definitely the best horror game on the site!
on 12/2/2008 10:47:11 PM
This game is fantastic. It's in the classic "choose your own adventure" format, is exciting, well written, and has an original (scary!) story. Very impressive. Congrats.
on 6/12/2007 12:45:17 PM
Great story!! I was on the edge of my seat the entire time! Still not breathing!
-- Belle Melander on 12/15/2017 11:30:37 PM
It's a fun little story. Several different paths to take, most ending in death. Unfortunately, there's heavy emphasis on "little" story. Even getting to a good ending was still relatively quick. I feel like this story could have benefited from taking a little more time to expand it. More thorough descriptions, deeper characters, a bigger house to explore and a slower build to the danger and horror would have easily changed this fairly simple concept into something much deeper and more memorable. But, as I said, it's still fun despite being short. 5/8
on 11/27/2017 10:57:39 PM
why so this story so short?
and I didn't understand the story
on 11/13/2017 9:08:36 PM
Well that's easy... just take another look at the scary kid and I'm out. Wow! :)
on 10/5/2017 12:36:32 AM
this story is amazing my heart was beating so fast this whole time wondering if i could control them and let them live
-- illegal_potato on 9/25/2017 3:27:50 PM
It's way too hard
on 8/30/2017 7:36:57 AM
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