hetero_malk, The Contributor

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3/14/2020

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8/5/2020 6:50 AM

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this is a new account, but I've been around for a few years and would be happy to give feedback on your works-in-progress

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Recent Posts

Born A Poor Black Child on 8/5/2020 1:38:25 AM

right! man i forgot her username all i remember was it being stupid and forgettable as fuck, just like she is 


Born A Poor Black Child on 8/5/2020 1:29:39 AM

no, that was the other one. the dumb bitch with the lion avatar 


A Very Senty Dream Journal on 8/2/2020 4:46:58 PM

pretty sure it means you want to fuck your mom dog 


Born A Poor Black Child on 8/1/2020 3:58:09 AM

here miz, listen to this to balance things out. 

 

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v20200003 Update on 8/1/2020 3:24:18 AM

killa you sweet, kind man 


Born A Poor Black Child on 7/28/2020 8:02:21 PM

no one: 

puddlebunni: 

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everyone in this thread on 7/28/2020 10:38:10 AM
no that sounds like someone else

everyone in this thread on 7/28/2020 2:35:42 AM


Risk My Attention (New World Order) on 7/26/2020 6:50:26 PM

Recommending for deletion: Dragons, by Abigail http://chooseyourstory.com/story/dragons

It's maintained less than a 2.9 in the five and change years since it's published. There's a total lack of characterization, little to no choice for the player, and the only item in the story does nothing. The grammar is atrocious, the story is childish, and it's less than two thousand words. This is a relic of CYS' dark history that deserves a bullet. 

Recommending for deletion: Wizard Duel at Wizard School, by Aureus. 

It's sitting at a 2.82 after five years. There are no characters, nor is there a setting or plot to speak of. The game consists of one page with a half dozen choices, all of them leading to death / defeat except for the one that lets you win before spitting you out at the ending. It's not fitting with the culture of actually good games that the site seems to be inculcating, recently. http://chooseyourstory.com/story/wizard-duel-at-wizard-school

Recommending for Deletion: Long Gone, by thechristianyu http://chooseyourstory.com/story/long-gone

It is unacceptably linear. There is only one path, and deviation from it is punished by instant death. There's no reason for this game to exist. It's also barely above the 2.5 instant death threshhold. Fuck this game.


What’s Up on 7/26/2020 5:20:53 PM

coming back here is the exact kind of baffling decision that would be surprising from anyone except you,  the most chromosome-rich child soldier in kiel's army of kids who have more crayons lodged in their brain than IQ points