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Player Rating4.03/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 69 ratings since 11/12/2016
played 567 times (finished 73)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Tags

Drama

Your life is definitely going downhill... The bullies at school are getting meaner and meaner, your friends are all chasing after girls, and you can't even think straight woth your teachers yelling at you for having C's. Your wise math teacher helps you break out of your funk...

Player Comments

It needs to be longer
-- Ashu on 11/19/2017 8:34:35 AM with a score of 0
I rate it six! I really did enjoy this story and it's principles and morals. It was well written (save for multiple grammatical errors), and, in my opinion, deserves a better rank!

I thoroughly enjoyed the lecture we were given, as it made perfect sense, as well as feeling a bit personal for me as well. It was really great with the talent show bit, which added more than just the school feeling that most school-related stories have (To elaborate on 'school feeling', I mean as in the boring details of going through every class before anything interesting happens, and even then, it's written just as dull). I recommend a revision on the grammar, which really was the only issue with this story. Other than that, It's great! I can't wait to see more of your works, Minnie!
-- Comic on 8/29/2017 2:19:37 PM with a score of 0
Not bad. I played this a couple of times and got different results.
-- crazygurl on 6/6/2017 11:30:27 PM with a score of 0
This is the best story I've read so far. This is amazing keep it up! I rated it 9.
-- Missle0945 on 5/4/2017 7:22:14 PM with a score of 0
The story was fine, but you used some weird ways to represent things, such as saying, "The anger started in my toes then went up to my head." The grammar was also poor throughout. Fix these and you will have a halfway decent short story.
-- The Man on 4/7/2017 10:26:59 PM with a score of 0
A great short story!
-- Chickdove on 3/20/2017 4:11:37 PM with a score of 0
I like the moral behind all of this, and I liked that it was all because of the m554 tea4455 ( numbers block off spoilers )
-- Doodler623 on 1/10/2017 10:23:01 PM with a score of 0
Great story!
-- Voltage on 11/15/2016 8:33:32 PM with a score of 0
There were quite a number of spelling and grammar mistakes. The story itself was pretty good. I can tell you are improving so keep it up.
-- BigRonn77 on 11/15/2016 1:47:27 PM with a score of 0
Cute and well written, but the math is off.
-- betaband on 11/12/2016 12:23:09 AM with a score of 0
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