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Player Rating4.10/8

"#308 overall, #21 for 2016"
based on 128 ratings since 11/12/2016
played 1,278 times (finished 153)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Tags

Drama

Your life is definitely going downhill... The bullies at school are getting meaner and meaner, your friends are all chasing after girls, and you can't even think straight woth your teachers yelling at you for having C's. Your wise math teacher helps you break out of your funk...

Player Comments

Interesting setup for this story. It sounds like it will be fun: but that was sure a rough start! I like the descriptions on the first page – they are a little factual, but since the story is first person, that makes sense. I like that I’ve got clear choices on the first page. It was pretty clear that one option wasn’t going to work. I’m not sure the other options are actually much of a choice, though. I like that there are different choices, but did they have any effect on the story? It appears that no matter which choice I take, I still end up in 6th period with no differences.

I’m not against choices that eventually lead back to a bottleneck, but those are much more effective when the paths that lead back to the bottleneck have an effect. In this case, for example, running to the teacher might get your backpack back, and that gives you an additional option when you’re in math class or something like that. That appears to happen again with the teacher, but maybe there’s effects that I just can’t see going on.

I did like the various options and places the story took me. I liked the different settings and physical places to go, too. There were a number of dead-ends, but that’s good because many of them were at least a little obvious, too. Very well done!
-- Ogre11 on 5/11/2018 1:27:13 PM with a score of 0
This was actually a pretty good story. I enjoyed it. It was paced well, and wasn’t too short. 6/8
-- C6H8O6 on 4/23/2019 8:11:06 PM with a score of 0
This made me cry
-- The_Broken_God on 4/23/2019 7:52:11 PM with a score of 0
It wasn't bad, but it could be better if it was more exciting, like the main character performed in public and was sorta socially awkward,idk.
-- Moonfall on 12/22/2018 2:12:08 PM with a score of 0
This was actually a pretty nice story if I might say so myself! I'm not usually a fan of school-based stories, so that's a bit surprising in and of itself.

The writing was good, at least I didn't notice any mistakes while I was reading and actually quite fun to read through.

It was a bit shorter than I wished it to be, but hey, you can't drag a story on forever.

Overall, it was actually a really fun read, thank you!
-- Claw2k11 on 11/19/2018 8:03:20 AM with a score of 0
It ended way to fast.
-- Skyler M Baker on 9/26/2018 10:58:45 AM with a score of 0
Good job! This is just an inspiring story overall!
-- MusicalNerd7 on 6/5/2018 10:30:16 AM with a score of 0
The game feels that no matter what you pick it has the same ending, for example you will win the talent show and you have to go to the gym after going to ice cream shop and the park.
-- godiegoh on 4/12/2018 4:45:26 PM with a score of 0
Absolutely wonderful. A great message and fun to play.
-- Mama on 4/12/2018 11:20:23 AM with a score of 0
:) This is truly inspirational, a wonderful message. It is awesome. This should get 8 because it is enlightening.
-- HowdyHiHello on 4/12/2018 12:54:24 AM with a score of 0
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