Betrayer

Player Rating3.35/8

"#441 overall, #45 for 2015"
based on 100 ratings since 01/17/2015
played 724 times (finished 123)

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

A really short story about a destructive Friendship.

But it's not what it seems to be.  

Maybe you'll find out what this is all about and who 'she' really is. 

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If you want to know the real background you can write me a message and maybe I will tell you. 

And again, I am sorry if there are any mistakes but English is not my native language and I try my best! 

 

Player Comments

I've seen this done before, the attempt to make a "relationship drama" that's actually about addiction. This one doesn't work for me.
The plot is too vague to be compelling. The relationship is too anthropomorphized, there's too much that doesn't make sense if she isn't a real person.
I'd like to see you write something longer, more complex and more concrete.
-- Sethaniel on 1/19/2015 2:33:12 PM
The writing style is very compelling if in danger of being too minimalistic, it would have been impossible to maintain the lack of knowledge in a longer story without the reader losing interest. Still, this was different in a good way and I enjoyed reading it :)
-- Will11 on 1/18/2015 1:08:44 PM
This story is very interesting to me! Although some complain about the brevity of the story, I think that's what adds more to it. I appreciate the layers of this piece :-)
-- scoople on 6/21/2018 1:40:22 PM
I liked this! This game leaves room for... a sequel? Interpretation? Many might say it is strange but I believe there is something in there that makes me really like this :D
-- FlightOfGracefulDove on 6/6/2018 10:26:23 PM
This was an enjoyable little piece of work, for me at least. The choices I wanted to make were there, it made sense to me except for the Reckless ending, but I suppose that's the point. However, it provides no background for the characters, which only compels me so far. If this story were any longer, I'm afraid I'd find myself losing interest before too long.
-- TheMonitor on 5/10/2017 10:40:24 PM
This is just a worse version of the flash game Air Pressure. Please be more original.
-- WouldntItBeNice on 1/20/2017 2:38:47 PM
I enjoyed this story. I believe you covered up the plotholes in your last story. I didn't check the date though. So I gave you 4/8.
-- Cocoabeans on 6/10/2016 2:54:34 PM
To short.
-- Shadow_Strider on 1/26/2016 9:08:06 PM
Can't tell if this game was about drugs or schizophrenia, but either way I found it really interesting despite how short it was. ^_^
-- Briar_Rose on 1/14/2016 11:12:35 AM
Short and choices didn't effect that much.
-- betaband on 8/3/2015 2:55:05 PM
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