Cold Hands

Player Rating2.87/8

"#911 overall, #123 for 2015"
based on 178 ratings since 02/06/2015
played 2,662 times (finished 204)

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

This, is a romance story, do not hesitate to give me bad reviews.

Player Comments

It felt a bit like two stories that were not connected, the first was a school-based one with no clear direction while the second was a typical tragic love story. I think my favourite line was "that night unspeakable things happened" which is great for the imagination. What went down? A mute's convention? A mime's audition? A sleeping lions competition? :) It reminded of Gone with the Wind where the hero carries his wife upstairs and the camera fades to black... in a romance story don't be afraid to dwell a little on the physical side of the romance as well as the emotional as readers love that kind of thing :) Overall ok written but needs more consistency.
-- Will11 on 2/6/2015 11:58:51 PM with a score of 0
As Sethaniel pointed out below, this story lacks overall development, and suffers from issues related to pacing. It could be better by extending the overall story, and developing important plot points, while quickly reviewing (but not full-on explaining) minor events and such.

Overall, it's not too bad, since I have seen FAR worse. But, I will admit that some of my past homework assignments have been more fun than this story. So, I give your tale a 3/8.
-- LeoScales7 on 2/6/2015 8:47:21 PM with a score of 0
There was some good description. The story stated off promising, but overall fell short.
the beginning need a little more setup- it took too long for me to figure out who the player was supposed to be. Too many choices where I don't know if I'm male or female, how old I am, etc.
More importantly, the pacing was way way off. You spent 90% of the story on the missing bag, talking to mom, little sister, snowball fight. Then within the space of three pages, I meet a guy, we fall instantly in love, and I die.
You spent a good amount of time building up the daily life of the heroine, and none at all on the actual romance,
-- Sethaniel on 2/6/2015 3:20:31 PM with a score of 0
The ending. ummm...
-- DecemberDuck on 2/27/2020 7:39:26 AM with a score of 0
It was sad
-- He on 11/18/2019 10:19:04 AM with a score of 0
Wait a minute. What happened?! When u do a surprise ending/twist there needs to be a neat segue leading to it. Because there was none, the last page feels like a completely different story. There were also missed chances for something interesting, -- eg. cold hands (is he a vampire?), the relationship continuing and becoming more before they have a child, etc.
-- Quorrah on 2/27/2017 12:42:36 AM with a score of 0
I'm not sure how cheeks can "feel red."
-- MrMustachio on 2/18/2017 9:35:34 AM with a score of 0
It truly is interesting when you put 'The Date' X3
-- GenerationAlezz on 12/23/2016 4:30:31 PM with a score of 0
This was AMAZING
-- EliaBuck on 12/16/2016 2:10:10 PM with a score of 0
so sad
-- laxkay on 9/19/2016 4:53:42 PM with a score of 0
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