Player Comments on Dummy

Ok. How can this actually be called a "storygame"? I can do something better than this not know 3 strikes your out shit. No offense needs more work. If you will not add more work, than delete it.

Kinda funny but there are only 3 choices and well....this isn't even a game nor a book. No story, just completely random.

Wait! This means that this game is taking up the title "Dummy!" NO!!!!

This makes no sense and it has no point why would you publish this?

this story makes me in favour of a system by which if a story gets enough total votes and has a low enough average, it gets deleted automatically. (ie 20 votes, average around 1/8)

...*Hisses*

You have lots of potential as a troll. Your grammar is too good, though.

Delete this, please. It's just junk. School-based, and there are ninjas? Come on.

Thanks for the free EXP point btw.

If profanity has to be used at least use it correctly like EndMaster

even worse than the get off the island game. seriously, look up that game and you will understand just how much I hate this right now

you disappoint me.

I've always wanted to be poisoned. I seriousy rated it 8/8. no joke.

The coolest game on this site! Completely worthwhile! 8/8!

(This has been the biggest lie in the universe.)

Delete this worthless piece of crap! I can't use the editor, because of accessibility issues (I'm visually impaired), but even I think I could do better. Oh, and hey. My english sucks too! Delete, delete, delete or taste my feet!

I don't even see how this is testing the editor. Heck, why would you even need to test the basic editor? It is called "basic" for a reason.

I rated this 8 out of 8... Because I can! :p

Seth says HELL NO!!!! What was the point of this? 1/8

MAY THE DEITY'S OF CYS SMITE YOU FROM THIS PLANE!

i appreciate you trying the editor out, but this should NEVER have been published. please take it down.

This shit makes us all look bad, dude. Do the ENITRE storygame community a favour and delete this crap. *facepalm*

This....was horrible. Pure horrible. Not even remotely funny. Put some effort into your stuff man. Heck, put HALF your effort into this. If this were Newgrounds I'd demand that this be blammed. Uber Epic Fail.

. . . . What?

Why? Just, why? Why would you make something like this? If you want to see what you can do here, make a demo of a game that you actually put effort into. Or a full game of a game that you actually put effort into.

It's not good enough for 2 points. But the fact that I got laid makes me want to give it more than 1 point. Too bad there isn't a 1.25... well, 1 it is.

Believe it or not, but I've seen worse. It was timj attacking JJJ if I remember correctly.

Bad bad............

This isn't even a story game

What the fuck is this? Three damned choices(all of which lead to retarded endings), the worst writing I have EVER seen, and not in the least bit funny. Delete this 'story'.

Too bad a 1 is the lowest rating I can give for this 'story'. It just seems a bit too high ;)

ass-hole

....1/8

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sad.

DUDE, DELETE THIS SHIT ALREADY

Oh and i gave it 1/8

Maybe you should write a book called how to write i story called dummy for dummys

This isn't engaging or humorous. Not sure what you were trying to accomplish with this storygame.

Not the best I've played.

It's really short, the pages aren't that long, and I can tell you didn't put a lot of effort into this. I know that some people like games where there is no plot and you're just playing around, which is nice, but you didn't do that well. It just came off as a cheap game with not a whole lot of effort put into it.

My suggestion is to make it longer with better choices other than just sexual ones that continue the story(because some people, like me, don't really like reading a story just about sex.) Also, you should try to take your games more seriously because you can ruin your reputation and standing in the community.

1/8

thx for feedback.
No, marmotlord, but I fucked the school hottie ;)

"based off a true story"?
so you're the sexual slave of your gay science teacher?

dafuq is this?
i bet it took you 2 minutes!
And I think the posioned food was the good ending.

I took it seriously, didn't work. So I tried to take it humorously, that didn't work either. Since I can't like it in any way I can possibly think about it, I gave it a 1. Congratulations.