Player Comments on Happy birthday Mr. zombie

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This is incompetently written. You need to work on grammar, and putting together a coherent story. 1/8

Dear god, this is horrible. Um... let's look for pros.
You used a...picture?
You can win, unlike Jewel Thief?
I'm stumped. 1/8

Umg suh good bezt strygme 3v3r. 8/8 umgg OMIGOSH SUH GUD>

How are schools spending there funding? You don't even follow basic grammar rules.

Now, now, Briar, there is no way to tell if the shotgun was for you or your strangely absent twin brother whose zombie bite was supposed to be vital to the plot.

... Well that sure was considerate of your parents to get you a shotgun for your birthday ^_^

No.

Awful but a good contrast to the well crafted games that have been produced very recently. I am most impressed that it took 2 people to produce what I would have thought 1/2 a person could have. Speaking positives it has no sequel.

You're lucky immediate deletion isn't happening right now...

This is just horrid. I'm sure that this'll be deleted.

Well, the good news is that this meets all the criteria for immediate deletion.

The bad news is that you have made no improvements in writing since your last game. In fact, this is actually worse than "survive at all costs". It has no plot. It has no story, aside from what you tell us in the ball of disjointed sentences that make up your synopsis. Endings are random.

Nice

Nice