"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played 84 times (finished 8)
"march in the swamp"
"A well spent lunch break"
"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
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Such a lovely place...
Authors note: it's broke and I wanted it finished. I think it was supposed to be an entry for a contest sometime Jan 2019? So yeah it's not getting fixed but I did test it and it is beatable. Some parts don't make sense out of a certain order but the information is the same. Also can't figure out why sleeping makes you have to click go out into the hallway twice for it to work? Anyways just don't give up if a link seems to not work it probably just needs to be clicked twice.
The looping structure of this game is not especially fun to read; more unique text or interesting description would probably work better. More importantly, the grammar situation is deeply in need of work--possessive issues, run-on sentences, and spelling issues are really distracting.
This is wholly aside from the way the links stop working in your room--I ran into a few times where I had to start over, because neither link worked at all.
on 8/26/2019 7:15:09 PM with a score of 59
NO, THIS IS PATRICK!
on 8/23/2019 2:18:09 PM with a score of 92
Is this the Krusty Krab?
on 8/23/2019 12:11:42 AM with a score of 84
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