MAG The college years, Freshman year.

Player Rating2.57/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 137 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

In this game, every person on MAG is in College,and there is roommates the roommates,are picked by you,The three main Admins are together,three mods are together,and the reguars are seperated. you can also talk,and duel And There Will be a part which has college Tests,that will be easy,and you can learn different Languages to,and the MAG people,will you know,do college stuff. Also an added extra, you can Also be a college Sports player,such as baseball,football,Hockey,and Basketball.i also added that You got captured,and someone died. can't tell you who,you have to play it, Good Luck!

Player Comments

that was not what i expected, certainly lower than my expectations. there are many grammar and spelling errors and the story did not flow properly
-- jj morgan on 9/6/2016 5:33:28 PM with a score of 0
What the heck??? There was almost NO times when you could choose your own patj, and when you DID, you either died, or continued the 1-path story. So. Annoying.
-- Ginnyweasleybooklove on 8/25/2016 10:19:09 PM with a score of 0
No point of the game you have no name no room no anything
-- Robin3443 on 7/23/2016 10:35:41 PM with a score of 0
I just wanted this to be over so I could get my point and ended up randomly clicking.
The first page alone was giving me a headache when I tried to understand it.
-- Seto on 6/18/2016 1:36:23 AM with a score of 0
Fuck this
-- Jmw on 5/5/2016 3:58:50 PM with a score of 0
The spelling and grammar really needs improving. One word on the spelling test was spelled wrong. The word was "complain" and it was spelled "c-o-m-p-l-i-a-n"
-- lolitup4 on 4/5/2016 3:14:27 PM with a score of 0
I don't know if this story can be saved.

The most obvious problem is the grammar. Please learn grammar. Spelling was better, excale that during the 'spelling' test the correct answer was complian (not complain, which is the correct spelling of the word).

Secondly, it is horribly linear. Most of the times it was struggling to read through a paragraph, having the option of one link to click at the bottom, and reading through another paragraph. Add links! We want options!

Thirdly, the plot. As far as I could tell, we started out in college, played hockey, went to a camp, and then ended up in Afghanistan? Plot twists are nice, but I just felt as if this was a but too much of sudden plot shifts.

If you really want to save your story, I suggest asking someone for help and maybe coauthoring.
-- AllThatIsGold on 1/10/2016 9:16:45 AM with a score of 0
bad bad spelling
-- martin on 7/10/2015 11:11:40 PM with a score of 0
This is un-FUCKING-acceptable. Atrocious grammar.0/8
-- VMickyD on 4/7/2015 3:10:06 AM with a score of 0
You barely get to DO anything and you have only one option most of the time........ lame :( 2/8
-- ko_hankinator on 1/31/2015 2:02:43 AM with a score of 0
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