Player Comments on Minutes To Midnight

Hey man I am still here!

The Bloodlines Sequel is pretty philosophical, you have great potential.

Pfff, I will republish it...one day. *looks in the horizon while epic music plays*

Not really a story game.

Needs republishing to divide the cut and pasted story-games into pages

haha. I will certainly repubublish it.

(Sigh) It's not even a computer. It's actually a 6 year old java phone with Opera mini 4.2. It doesn't have copy paste and it's so damn slow that...that you would want to throw it outta the window. One day. But thanks for reading!

Honestly, I think you should have just taken the extra time to copy/paste all the different pages into different links. It might have taken a lot longer if your computer's as slow as you say, but you'd probably have gotten better ratings for it.

Ah, well, I really don't see any game element whatsoever, so I had to rate it lower. (Maybe you just need a better understanding of how the editors work?) But you are a good writer with good ideas! Especially since English is your third language :)

...ahem

what? obviously the editings wrong if you fixed it it could be very good but currently i do not think it is even technically a game.

The quality of the stories varies allot. The worst I would award a 2 and the best a 5. I may be giving you more credit than you deserve on that though, some might not overlook your failure utilizing the editor. I'm also being forgiving of some understandable grammar issues. You might want to look into a coauthor for the purpose of fixing some of these issues. Cleaning up your work will improve it considerably!

Don't choose SICK for heaven's sake

Writing was not too bad, liked the gamebook style.

Thanks for comments. There is a reason why I can't do that. I rarely get access to an internet and it's usualy for 10 minutes or such. And it's real slow. It took me like 20 minutes ro copy paste those five pages and I can't afford to make multiple pages and such. I wrote that story on a Samsung Galaxy and it had messed up my stories in the past. Anyway, thanks! But it wouldn't change until I get a pc with an internet. Haha. Sorry.

I didn't rate this story because I think something went wrong with your editor. You've been here long enough to know how links work and look like so I'm assuming your computer is buggy or something. I would suggest taking it down(Not because it's awful) and try to work through the system or ask for help.

Until then, I think it would be best for me to wait to read the story till you have time to fix it.

The story ideas here look pretty good, actually (aside from SICK, which seemed to not develop enough/just be SICK for SICK's sake.).
However, I felt the stories would have been better if you had used the advanced editor the way it's meant to be used. Instead of making the user scroll up and down (although I must admit the "add item number" system is clever), just use links to new pages, and instead of forcing the user to remember code words, just use variables and change their values.

All in all, the stories seem good, but the use of the available programming needs work. I hope you'll use the editor and fix these up, because they look like they're well done (if a little short).

Sorry for every single error. :'-(