The Annihilation (part one)

Player Rating3.94/8

"#450 overall, #46 for 2013"
based on 70 ratings since 03/04/2013
played 594 times (finished 79)

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

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"It was like any other day, the day humankind was to cease existing..."

 

This story is strictly about the survival and possible romance in a world driven to apocalypse by the robotic creations of a mysterious figure. Choose your path wisely, and you might just survive in this ghastly world where death lurks at every corner.

You play as Aliyah, a senior in Grianthol High School, who has everything going for her until the world starts crashing down around her.

Enjoy the ride!

(Note: The images are more or less like a storyboard or concept art. They are only there to support the story.)

Player Comments

Pretty interesting. The action certainly provided a bit of a thrill, but I couldn't help but be confused about certain things. Like why isn't everybody acting more surprised about the fact that there are suddenly killer robots among us? How is it that Aliyah is so good at fighting those robots?

Some more information on certain things would've been appreciated, even if it's just the start of a bigger adventure.

The pictures were rather jarring at times too. I know that some of the scenes were supposed to be serious and dramatic, but the art would sometimes lessen the tone of certain scenes. It didn't detract too much from my enjoyment of everything though.

Overall, this game was pretty decent. The writing wasn't bad and the action scenes were pretty fun, the drawings weren't really my taste, but it's certainly a positive that they were there to accompany the writing.
-- TharaApples on 10/22/2016 5:52:05 PM with a score of 0
This story feels like it was written by a bored in class, lonely girl in middle school/highschool.

Also the main character is probably a mary sue. And the um...art...Let's not talk about that.

I've got nothing else to say. Stay away from the garbage folks.
-- Random critic on 6/6/2019 4:23:32 AM with a score of 0
Um, at first I was going to comment to say that the pictures were bad - but then they got REALLY creepy and started to scare me. It's like they were drawn by one of those creepy girls in horror movies who goes on a killing spree. After that I just couldn't concentrate on the story.

Oh, and your writing is good too. That art, though. It scarred me.
-- Saika on 9/20/2017 6:03:02 AM with a score of 0
Cute story. Benjamin and I survived. {3
-- Quorrah on 1/22/2017 9:31:34 PM with a score of 0
Quite short, but the illustrations made it so much more interesting. The plot was ok, although I thought the characters were not described well enough for me to really feel too much for them. But all in all, 5/8. Good job.
-- Shadowulf on 5/28/2016 6:10:54 PM with a score of 0
I survived with Benjamin! :)
-- Kate on 5/23/2016 5:52:07 PM with a score of 0
I didn't really like the pictures. They kind of distracted me from the story.
-- lolitup4 on 3/30/2016 3:46:46 PM with a score of 0
Why is this girl a bad ass...?
Who is this guy...?
Why are killer robots not a huge shock...?
Why the period period period...?
I'm sorry, but this needs a lot of expansion before it gets good.
-- Isshyyyji on 10/20/2015 12:15:06 PM with a score of 0
Good story. I survived, though no one (except ol' Ben) survived with me. Looking forward to seeing more.
-- dtcox001 on 7/19/2015 10:23:42 PM with a score of 0
Amazing cant wait to see part 2
-- LegomanWJ on 6/12/2015 8:40:57 AM with a score of 0
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