Player Comments on The Right Way

This game was pretty promising, but feels incomplete and leaves the reader a little unsatisfied. I know you say in the description that this is a stage setter for later storygames, but it would be nice if the story lasted longer and didn't kill the protagonist no matter which path you choose. I just can't help but feel like it's an unfinished storygame.

That said, it was well written (albeit with some errors), had good characterisation and it felt like it could have been a pretty interesting story and world with some more detail and fleshing out.
-- 31TeV on 9/24/2014 6:57:15 AM
TRASH. Always ends quick.
-- 32Tev on 5/23/2018 6:43:24 PM
It's okay.....I guess
-- Joe Fresh on 5/23/2018 6:38:25 PM
no thxs
-- dfgh on 5/18/2018 10:31:55 AM
It was pure hype. But it wasn't that bad still...
-- Sabesan on 5/8/2018 6:40:59 PM
It's interesting that your goal isn't "winning" in the traditional sense. There could be a little bit more meat to the decisions, however.
-- Lockirby2 on 5/3/2018 11:06:02 PM
i love it
-- Jakethebro on 2/14/2018 12:51:42 PM
Not bad, it could be longer with more choices, however.
-- Shadowgirl_101 on 4/8/2016 2:34:23 PM
Good story, but unfinished.
-- Jimmysutton on 3/17/2016 9:54:54 AM
-- Rebecca on 9/10/2015 11:31:25 PM
Too short for me
-- Penworth on 6/11/2015 6:07:23 AM
Well the writing was very good and rather fun but the story was short, linear and the choices rather simple ones. This could have been expanded into a full-length fantasy adventure but I'd certainly like to read more of your writing.
-- Will11 on 3/9/2015 7:14:56 AM
A bit unsatisfying as far as endings go but pretty well written.
-- hugo23 on 11/30/2014 10:16:54 PM
Not much story, and I don't quite get how it sets the stage as there is very little in the way of setting. Decent for a few minutes of distraction however.
-- MythicBowman on 8/22/2013 12:50:27 AM
I... don't understand. Why did you put a link to the picture of the helmet when you could've just put in the picture of the helmet, right on the page?
-- Kiel_Farren on 6/17/2013 4:23:12 AM
Not bad, Decent branching, enjoyable writing, and a believable set up. The endings were all pretty similar so you lose points there. Moreover, we don't exactly get allot of plot development. Not bad all and all. A great first go to say the least.
-- ugilick on 5/31/2013 3:33:11 PM
So you die no matter what? I guess that's war for you... Only a precious few survive, and sometimes you just can't survive no matter what you do.
-- cchoi16 on 5/14/2013 8:07:45 PM
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