Yay or Nay?

Player Rating2.75/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 66 ratings since 01/29/2017
played 287 times (finished 68)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Tags

Humor

A short game that is more like a test of what choice one would make in different situations

(Note: It is a short escape game)

Player Comments

First of all, I'm started and almost finished my first story, almost like you. (Just note that)
I would like from you to add more options to your story and maybe some drama, because I feel while I'm reading your story a bit tired and bored at the same time, I am liking reading short stories but not stories that have only two options and there's nothing special about it.
And one more thing that I noticed is that your story is too long for the door events (4 or 5 to enter or not) and it's a bit messed up.
I'm recommending you to think about good story that have something special and some more options to choose from.
Final rating: 2/8.
-- TheGamerKing777 on 12/23/2017 3:02:00 PM
You literally could have had any program containing Mickey Mouse play on the television. Why Fantasia?

A mediocre game. It would be much better with more than two options for each page; not that each page has to have several continuing leads, it just makes for a more interesting experience than literally having YES/NO being shoved into your face.

Good luck next time. :^)
-- ZagHero on 8/18/2017 2:52:40 AM
Imagine if every story on this site was just Yay or Nay. You can't choose this option, you can't choose that one...nope, it's either Y/N or go home.
-- Saika on 5/22/2017 6:45:10 AM
It could be better. You need to put more options on what you can do in it, as well as adding more detail to give it more of a story so our minds can really get into it. Not terrible though.
-- RainbowDash on 3/26/2017 3:52:23 AM
i liked it
-- hunter janos on 3/14/2017 5:07:32 AM
It was fun it's like the game you play once you download it of the app store the "Can you escape?" game i give it a 4/8.
-- MillenniumDawn on 3/1/2017 6:23:16 PM
The only options you have are "Yay" and "Nay", and you have little control of what happens as the story progresses. I do not believe this will be published much longer.

The writing is simple and provides little detail of the surroundings and the situation. There's not much at all to this story, with about ten words per page and it turns very repetitive.

There is little to no plot in this story, and in my opinion, that doesn't make it a storygame at all. A good story needs a developed plot, characters, and challenges/problems that should be overcome. Sure, they're are problems here but they are rather dry and simple.

2/8
-- Nyctophilia on 2/16/2017 10:06:35 AM
I admit, I chose to wake up and stay asleep.
-- Endeavour on 2/4/2017 4:07:09 PM
I found that this story was mildly entertaining simply for the reason of wanting to click "Yay" a million times. But I digress. After all, this is a website for writing stories and improvements, yes? Let's get on with the review.

Firstly, I found that this story's length of pages was pretty decent besides the fact there was about two sentences for each. Creating more content and releasing a big, detailed escape stories would be most appropriate for the audience I am presuming that you are aiming for. This, however, doesn't quite strike my fancy. Perhaps try adding more content and puzzles to your game instead of simply two options and a description of each image.

Secondly, the choices are pretty much narrowed to Yes and No respectively. I believe if you added more choices that it would be better. Try your hand at more content as well, as I have previously stated.

Lastly, the plot of this game was nonexistent. If every story had an elaborate plot, it would be paradise, wouldn't it? Let's get one step closer to that if we can.

I do hope you take this constructive criticism to mind. Please don't take this as a bashing on your story. I mean and hope the best for your writing potential.
-- At_Your_Throat on 1/30/2017 7:47:32 PM
Escape the Room games are sort of a dime a dozen. This isn't bad for the category.
-- JJJ-thebanisher on 1/29/2017 3:16:50 PM
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