Player Comments on You're Fired!

Very funny! Small grammatical errors aside, this was a rather fun and enjoyable game. I liked the different scenarios that were in this, they were silly, but certainly entertaining to read.

If there was just a bit more polish to the presentation, this would be even better. For example in the first page, I spotted several errors that made me do a double take at what I was reading at times. Still, there was never a dull moment with this story and many things were quite hilarious.

Honestly, I enjoyed the various scenarios I found myself in by choosing different choices. Like running from a Yeti, or dancing with animated stone figures.

I also found the pictures to fit and compliment the scenes nicely, they were a great asset in making this story feel more animated and lively, making my subsequent reads more fun in all honesty. I did notice that some of pictures didn't seem to work, but it's not a gripe that I would hold against the writer as the ones that I was able to view fit the story well.

So, excellent marks on originality for this bizarre adventure. This was certainly a storygame that I enjoyed spending my time reading. :)
-- TharaApples on 2/14/2017 11:36:44 PM with a score of 0
I liked it. Decent amount of options made it really fun so I played over and over again. It was a bit silly at times but you made it fun and enjoyable to play. The only thing that held back this game was the spelling and the fact that it was short. I really would have liked to see this be longer with more options.

-- JMgskills on 2/28/2012 10:50:30 AM with a score of 0
As others have noted, there are a few different errors in the writing that may just be typos. They take a little away from the story, but not too much. I do like the idea of the story and I really like the options that appear in the story. It might have even worked better if you listed the options in the actual choice links instead of repeating them on the first page.

As this story is clearly quite old, quite a few of the images appear to be broken. The paths were quite short, but that is a feature of the story with lots of options. I did have some fun trying all the different pathways and finding different endings. There certainly were a lot of different choices and ways to go through the story. It maybe could have had some more descriptions in some places, but overall this was a neat, wandering, sort of random quick story. Thank you for sharing it with the site.
-- Ogre11 on 8/3/2018 10:07:53 PM with a score of 0
I like the idea! Fun short story to kill time
-- swimminnarwhals on 10/27/2017 9:29:23 PM with a score of 0
It's a good story, there were a few grammer mistakes and it was a bit short and random. But random was to be expected XD although not my style it's good for a sliy story!
-- Chickdove on 5/15/2017 10:48:34 PM with a score of 0
i'm going to miss phil
-- JasonX on 12/4/2016 12:16:21 AM with a score of 0
Ended up getting killed by a
-- CowBoySkinnyLinny on 11/27/2016 8:43:24 PM with a score of 0
Why do I have to work for Canadians out of all People. I Sue them
-- BossKat on 9/15/2016 3:41:16 PM with a score of 0
It's a funny story, simple but special.
-- Cutedaisy24 on 7/20/2016 7:08:12 AM with a score of 0
Great! I love the Yeti!
-- bisesto on 4/30/2016 2:08:04 PM with a score of 0
it was ok... wish I did not die at a wrong choice.
-- Jimmysutton on 4/7/2016 3:00:09 PM with a score of 0
I liked how much this story branched. Nice little time waster. 4/8.
-- SonicTurboTurtle on 3/28/2016 3:42:09 PM with a score of 0
Poor quality but amusing. 4/8
-- Aconc on 1/3/2016 9:28:03 AM with a score of 0
Did you take Phil from Rise of the Guardians? Because there was a yeti named Phil in that movie..
-- OnePieceTreasure on 11/14/2015 12:15:49 PM with a score of 0
Very short, but well thought out. The only bad thing is how linnar each story line is, eavh only having two or three endings.
-- Dmanxbox on 10/21/2015 3:03:25 PM with a score of 0
ok yeah I guess..., It's cool.
-- Commento on 6/15/2015 9:18:02 PM with a score of 0
Haha! Partying with the Easter heads is WHAT I DO :) Nice game; I liked it and I will totally go and check out all of the other possibilities! :D
-- AgentBunny on 4/4/2015 7:22:16 PM with a score of 0
Quite funny.
-- Creature on 3/21/2015 6:06:43 AM with a score of 0
-- Ginger on 3/20/2015 11:40:07 AM with a score of 0
Seems like an entertaining short story. A bit silly and lighthearted, and the grammar could be better. But altogether a cute little journey :)
-- insanebutvain on 9/3/2014 11:54:26 PM with a score of 0
It was decent but there was not a lot of stuff to do and the endings were rushed.
-- karpentpillar on 8/23/2014 4:17:05 PM with a score of 0
Interesting... Good for a couple of minutes of entertainment.
-- TheSophia on 7/16/2014 11:21:30 PM with a score of 0
Wasn't that good...
-- EarthCollision on 3/4/2014 5:19:22 AM with a score of 0
Good game, a bit short.
-- asdfqjoe on 11/27/2013 10:04:01 AM with a score of 0
-- Natalie on 10/8/2013 2:22:21 PM with a score of 0
Quite a nice story, language could be improved though. 5/8
-- Xt1000305 on 11/20/2012 9:55:54 AM with a score of 0
I really really liked this. XD The self pity mope and room service one really made me laugh.^_^ YETI HUG!!!!^___^ I just wish this was longer, it was a tad linear, but had enough choices. Great job!6/8
-- ChaiHai on 8/26/2012 11:50:33 PM with a score of 0
-- haledakota on 7/29/2012 11:26:29 AM with a score of 0
-- masterelf on 2/27/2012 10:10:43 AM with a score of 0
ummm looked promising but its kinda umm 3/8
-- masterelf on 2/27/2012 10:10:04 AM with a score of 0
short but cute
-- DarkentityOni on 10/23/2011 11:43:55 PM with a score of 0
Love the humor, 5/8
-- ThisisBo on 10/12/2011 7:23:52 PM with a score of 0
Random. 3/8
-- Killer999 on 9/26/2011 9:40:02 AM with a score of 0
I like randomness to a degree, but this randomness wasn't random enough, or too random for me. It was an odd random in between story.
-- alienalpha on 9/25/2011 8:08:23 PM with a score of 0
Seem's almost to random for me but if it's your first story, good job.
-- Fireplay on 9/24/2011 10:37:20 AM with a score of 0
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