OnePieceTreasure, The Contributor
long-ish super long game. This is my very first time and storygame on chooseyourstory.com, so I would love anything that criticizes or praises me, not just comments like, "it was bad" or "i liked it." So, anyway, this is about a 12-year-old girl named Sam who goes on an adventure in a *magical* land after going into a portal. She meets different talking animals and when you meet each one, a challenge is presented.
This is my first story that I published and the second story I've written.. I hope you like it. As the title suggests, you make decisions for a 12-year-old girl named Sam. She is the most indecisive person ever, and you have to help her.