"Come ON! stop acting like an idiot, it's not like anything will actually happen. it's all a story to keep little kids away from this place." That was the last Elizabeth said to you before she was swept away, lost forever, a final breath whisked away on the wind. where did she go? no one knows. (Please note that this is my first story and I'm pretty sucky at writing. Hope it makes sense!)

Thanks. It's just that someone thought that maybe this signified being SA'd by my father but it actually doesn't, it just made me feel like I was mocking it and I hate when serious things like that are mocked.

Oh. sorry if this upset you

How do I delete this thing?

Yeah, I see that too but this is something I found written by me years ago when I had no concept of that kind of stuff

'My crappy dad' - based of true events.

Today my skirt ripped, right up to the button.
I had a jacket to cover it, but that was only temporary.
I called my dad and told him.
He said he'd drop one off for me and to wait at the head office.
I waited ten minutes, twenty, thirty, bell.
He never showed up.
I spent an entire math lesson trying not to cry.
He's been doing this my entire life, but today was the last straw.
I don't trust him anymore.

This might have been a bit dramatic to you, but it's true, he's never been reliable.
anyone else got a bad dad?

Unfortunately, this statement is correct

I thought I'd go read the comments before the actually post to see what I'd be getting myself into... safe to say I'm absolutely terrified for what the future holds (Wish me luck ig)

Thank you very much! This is such a big help :)

I've noticed all the storygames I've read have a 'end game and rate' link at each ending. Do you just do this by linking it to a normal page or is there some special coding thing you've got to do? I really hope this makes sense as I'm absolutely terrible at explaining things and a complete newbie to this website.