asianitnhehouse, The Reader

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2/27/2015

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6/23/2015 6:24 AM

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(Busy at the moment with school, other reasons and all)

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Mark Of The Coloured Roes
unpublished

A young farm girl ran away from her once called home. Now, laid in rumbles from the vicious event. Through mystic lands and the unknown, along the way she meets interesting people and encounters. But in this strange and magical world not all adventures are safe. Why would a child, especially a young girl, journey through these lands even if it is quite suicidal. To find the truth behind her mark and hide from her pursuers.

You control her actions and craft her personality. 

*Note: It is quite serious? I don't know what it mean by serious. Anyway hope you enjoy this story with this adventure of a girl and magic*

*Another Note: Please understand I am an armature writer. Also I am 15 years old. I may have bad grammar issues and such.I do welcome insightful criticism and your welcome to help me in search for any typos and errors*


Recent Posts

Want To Know If Your Choices Will Have An Affect? on 3/4/2015 1:50:33 AM

No problem, don't doubt yourself. You have good intentions anyway so thanks for trying. Hope you have an awesome day.


Want To Know If Your Choices Will Have An Affect? on 3/3/2015 12:50:19 AM

Thank you for your advice on "fake choices." Have a great day to you sir. 


Want To Know If Your Choices Will Have An Affect? on 3/3/2015 12:37:20 AM

Sorry if this is troubling but can you explicitly show me. I am more of a visual learner which is why I am terrible at understanding codes on this website because I have to read the instruction. But if you can't that it is ok. I will just go for the extra step and choices. 


Want To Know If Your Choices Will Have An Affect? on 3/2/2015 4:15:24 PM

Sure thing I will destroy that system. Thanks for your response.


Want To Know If Your Choices Will Have An Affect? on 3/2/2015 4:14:00 PM

 Ok, I will kick the system out of the way of telling you explicitly that your choices might or may not have an affect. Thanks for the advice and your time.


Want To Know If Your Choices Will Have An Affect? on 3/2/2015 4:05:49 PM

Oh, that just questions your asking in the game like:

Sarah's mother gave her money so Sarah could buy some grocery.  

Sarah's response?

"Mum, why do I have to get the grocery?"

"Mum, am I going to die from rapists if I go out there?"

Continuing On And Just Nod

Or like:

Sarah paid the money to the cash lady.

Sarah's Response?

"Are you new?" Sarah Ask Mannerly

Be Silent, Stare At The Groceries Being Scanned One By One

It really doesn't affect the story but more like interact with the world kind of thing. But thanks for your time replying.

 


Want To Know If Your Choices Will Have An Affect? on 3/2/2015 3:55:17 PM

Read my previous post of me replying to Orger11 to get some clarification on my question. Sorry for the confusion. Anyway thanks for the advice I will keep that in mind for the future if I do use that tactic.


Want To Know If Your Choices Will Have An Affect? on 3/2/2015 3:41:56 PM

Sorry, I wrote this late at night. My English skills drops down pretty low. I thought it made sense but reading my comment again, I am quite embarrassed. Anyway, I will clarify the meaning. I was thinking of laying out a system where I tell you guys explicitly if your choices will have an affect or not above your available choices you get. For example:

Sarah went to the shop to pick up groceries for her mum. 

Sarah's Response? (Your Choices Will have an affect Later on)

Give The Money To Some Stranger

Spend The Grocery Money For lollies

Just Get The Groceries And Go Home

But reading some of the replies I think I just need to re-adjust a bit of my choices right now. Especially do not follow this system. Thanks for the advice and your time, I do appreciate it. 


Want To Know If Your Choices Will Have An Affect? on 3/2/2015 5:00:11 AM

So I am going to make a choose your adventure story but I was wondering if you guys wanted know if your choices will have an affect. Its just a basic fantasy choose your adventure story, not very good with coding especially when I am new to the website. Anyway back to the topic, for example, (Choose wisely, there are chances you will die) or like (Your choices will have an affect on your choices later on) or (Your choices will not have an affect on your options in the future) above your available options. Will you guys be cool with it, or does it disturb you guys, or just don't want to know for the sake of fun of not knowing? Or do you guys have other suggestions?