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https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1icWWncnGQ4b05WbllSVTR0TW8/view?usp=sharing

Here it is. Is this story worth continuing

Now, do remember that my native language isn't english... There are probably gramatical mistakes.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1V02eKwVuX8ExU4Tkw-lrAn-vEzvYjtqQVaBsVqAfnc8/edit?usp=sharing
I uploaded the wrong version. This is the right one

I'm nearing the end of chapter 2, still not finished though:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1icWWncnGQ4X3VSV3Y1UEFYZW8/view?usp=sharing

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1icWWncnGQ4enJ5ZjVOazVyQTQ/view?usp=sharing

There we go the end of chapter 2

I'd say it looks decent enough to make into a storygame here. Maybe even get a high rating if you put the right amount of effort into your story.

If you need a beta tester or someone to go back and fix your grammatical/spelling mistakes, I'm here to take up the offer.