benholman44, The Wordsmith

Member Since

4/2/2014

Last Activity

4/16/2024 7:14 PM

EXP Points

200

Post Count

167

Storygame Count

2

Duel Stats

946 wins / 1009 losses

Order

Marauder

Commendations

4

So my goals on this site: create a story game that's actually ranked at least a 6, get a trophy, and win approval from my favorite contributor on this site. Granted I'll probably fail at these three things, but still.

I got the trophy! And a commendation from my favorite author!  And my story 'Terrorist' had a ranking of 6.20. After ten years, all three goals have been met!

"Ben's life as far as I can tell has been one of turmoil and strife. He's been mocked, embarassed by his baby mama who then eventually left him for a tranny. And he had some other issues after that.

But it's all been leading up to this moment. I myself shall usher him into the Gates of CYStia where he shall be Eternal. Awaited and Blessed." -EndMaster

 

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Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points

Storygames

Halloween Fright

A short horror story where you're hazed on Halloween night. While others are trick-or-treating, you're involved in a fight for your life.


Terrorist

Entry for EndMaster's 2024 prompt contest.

Story prompt: A game revolving around carrying out a terrorist attack. There's actually several within this game, the method and motivations varying depending on your playthrough.

Warning: this story, while not explicit in accordance with site rules, does have sections involving murder, SA, incest, bestiality, racial undertones, and societal class discrimination. Essentially you're playing as a sick fuck who's also rich. Also keep in mind that while your protagonist can complete their objectives depending on how you play, there is no 'happy ending,' per se.


Recent Posts

Contest End is near! on 4/7/2024 6:52:48 PM

I'm wondering to find out about that myself. It'll probably be a couple months out...


Criticism needed on 4/5/2024 11:17:01 PM

They're a dime a dozen, thankfully.


Criticism needed on 4/5/2024 12:07:00 PM

Meh. Can't win 'em all.


Criticism needed on 4/4/2024 9:11:52 PM

I'm just gonna say it, and then I'll shut up. I respect both you and Ford as contributors to this site. I endeavor to make even HALF the impact that you guys have been making on this site. And yes, I've been spending the last couple days acting like the protagonist in my game: a whiny, entitled dick.

I apologize. I will think about what I'm saying in the future, and stand on what I do say. Happy?


Criticism needed on 4/4/2024 8:57:37 PM

Fair enough. I honestly was trying to be genuine with the appreciating his advice. The second part, which was not genuine, I was just annoyed by the fact that he told me to go suck cock and that he rated my story without even taking the time to read through it. I felt like he was saying my story wasn't worth the time to read, which is why I snapped the way I did.

And honestly, I was thinking that last part, but I was focused on defusing the situation.


Criticism needed on 4/4/2024 8:43:44 PM

Thank you. I agree that I don't have much experience with writing storygames. I feel that as time progresses and I get more practice, it should improve.


Criticism needed on 4/4/2024 8:42:12 PM

I appreciate the advice. Thank you. 


Criticism needed on 4/4/2024 2:49:48 PM

Good point. I don't always get social cues due to my ASD, and I don't really wanna end up in the same category as alienrun.

Gonna just stick to earning a Top Rater trophy.


Criticism needed on 4/4/2024 2:45:02 PM

Actually, come to think of it, that actually IS 'edgelord.' 

Huh. Well I still stand by the rest of my comment.


Criticism needed on 4/4/2024 2:43:08 PM

The first comment about appreciating his advice was sincere.

The second comment about being honored was a sarcastic dig meant to poke fun at him being SHAMED in response to him telling me to suck cock.

Putting them together made the whole thing look sarcastic. THAT was poor writing.

 

But you want insults? How exactly do you complain about my comments and then insist I double down on insults? How is a sarcastic dig on somebody who insulted me 'edgelord?'