Player Comments on Alley Cat > ChooseYourStory.com

So, here is my review.

Overall Rating: 3/8

The story was extremely boring. The choices plotted you to pick one, the other always ended badly. (All the hostile ones) The story kinda made no sense, the sentences were short and indescriptive. The only redeeming factor is that it seems to have a little effort put into it, but not much. 3/8 seems a little to forgiving, but I can't go back and IM NOT playing through again.

— RoyalGhost_007 on 4/23/2015 8:25:16 AM with a score of 0

Bad things: results of many choices are unpredictable, the game is mostly trial and error. One of the end scenes looks like the stray cat have met humans for the first time, which is unbelievable.
The good thing: it's overall enjoyable and fun. Not bad for a first game!
Rating: 4/8

— Excuse_Me on 4/23/2015 7:22:11 AM with a score of 0

Pretty good for a first game! There were no spelling or major grammatical errors that I could find. Only a few sentences that could be structured better caught my eye. Your writing is already pretty solid!

You have some good use of imagery, which I think you should focus on improving upon. A good example would be in the part where the main character finds the boat harbor. However, it's kind of hard to picture the harbor in my head when the author hasn't written a thing about it! What does it look like? Is it old and rickety? Or shiny, slick under the rain? Is it made of wood...or metal...are there boats anchored there?

I'm sure if you improve upon this, you're writing will become all the more enjoyable! Good luck! :)

— spycrow on 4/22/2015 9:13:14 PM with a score of 0

A little bit short, not much of a plot, but it's fun and writing/spelling/grammar is good, no errors.

— WizzyCat on 4/21/2015 9:21:09 PM with a score of 0

It's a good choose your story book if you are in the mood to read a short story.

— cdrose202 on 4/21/2015 12:17:06 PM with a score of 0

A few things: this is my FIRST GAME. also, about the swimming thing I am assuming you can't swim because you are weighed down by your belly. if its an issue I will change.

— DarkTsunami17 on 4/20/2015 7:00:37 PM with a score of 0

cats CAN swim, at least mine does.

— Wolfina on 4/20/2015 2:27:44 PM with a score of 0

good for you to poop on. seriously thinking about using the computer to wipe my butt

— Wolfina on 4/20/2015 2:26:38 PM with a score of 0

Whah... Cats can totally swim!

— ISentinelPenguinI on 4/20/2015 9:35:23 AM with a score of 0

I like this. I didn't get far in a cat's life, but from what I saw, you kept it at a realistic level. Slightly more fun than homework, because I used to enjoy homework XD.

— CreatorX on 4/19/2015 11:08:40 PM with a score of 0

I wouldn't call a puzzle

— AthenaT on 4/19/2015 2:45:25 PM with a score of 0

A few mistakes with commas, and it could have been longer, but the plot was relevant and proper spelling was used.