Player Comments on Claire of Lune

based on 29 ratings since 11/22/2017
played 1 times (finished 0)
your rating: unrated

Not much to comment about the game itself, but... how could there be 29 ratings when it is only played 1 time and finished 0?!

— TestingJest on 12/9/2017 12:40:05 AM with a score of 0

Excellent writing, but I want to know what happened to Claire's mother and how the place came to be like that—wrecked and with crazies running around. The story really pulled me in. :D

— Crescentstar on 9/16/2017 12:44:35 PM with a score of 0

Well written though as a story it feels more like a prologue than a complete entry.

— march5th00 on 5/10/2017 2:05:37 AM with a score of 0

Holy cosmos, am I sleep deprived or drunk? Only idiots think you can fire a bow. Sorry Wibbins, don't know what that was about, but I'm going to have to re-read every entry I've read today from your story on. Brain running in reverse. Been a long week...

— Bucky on 5/5/2017 6:40:51 PM with a score of 0

Wibbins, I am deeply disappointed. A girl does not shoot a bow. A girl looses or fires a bow.

— Bucky on 5/5/2017 2:27:19 PM with a score of 0

Reminds me of Romero

— Alaa on 5/1/2017 4:14:21 AM with a score of 0

I forgot to replace the first page's title with "The 1902 Winter in the American West". I won't modify the story until the contest is over, but I figured that information would make the story slightly less confusing.

— WouldntItBeNice on 4/29/2017 6:28:49 PM with a score of 0