Player Comments on Cyrus the Great Beast Hunter

How is this choose your own adventure?

What is it supposed to be? It's not even a game! This should have been published somewhere else! I only gave it such a high raiting because of the writing is good but please add more to it.

This is not a choose your own adventure!

Wow, a cliff hanger...write more please.

I didn't read all of it yet. I like the story and I like that you put work into it. It would be cool if the story arcs had choices in them, and I like that at the end you can go back to the main page or the story arc. I notice you tend to write things like" Cyrus hurriedly prepared, grabbing a bottle and a kit kat, hit movements were hurried."
You don't have to add that "his movements were hurried" if you just said that he hurriedly prepared. Its too redundant like that.
Anyways, this is an awesome story and I hope you keep writing.
P.S. I never could have imagined someone eating bear testicles for breakfast lol.

It's kinda weird how you gave readers a choice to stop reading at the very first page. . .

wasn't much of a game, but the stories were quite nice

That was okay, but I was expecting a story about a man who fights beasts, not a selection of stories that we cannot do anything in.

I don't about about anyone else but I think that this was a bit relaxing, because I did not have to make any choices.

It was a good idea to organize your stories like this. Very resourceful.

It's called "ChooseYourStory" because readers actually want to choose their own paths, not read a novel.

Not really a story game, just a bunch of standalone stories with no choice and no way to affect events other than the order you read them in.

Interesting in its own way :)

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