Okay, you are a moderator of the site, so you decide.

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/survive-the-zombies

I loved it, but I thought the prices on the hotel rooms could've been decreased a little bit.

Could you do some things like for example, when someone clicks a page on a story, it'd make a wiggle or some sort of movement, this could be done on the advanced editor.

Yes, but that's..

Well, I guess your right.

It determines on how strong it is, if it is but a mere hug or kiss, I can deal with it.

If it is the full on get in the shower sex thing, then I switch off the movie.

In the finished version.

The protagonist comes home one day with their entire city abandoned.
Bikes are left on the side of the road. Toys are still placed on the front gardens. Front doors wide open. Cars still parked in the driveways.

But then a loud explosion happens. Followed by a loud booming sound echoing in your eardrums. You crouch to the floor holding your ears as the booming continues, memories flood through your head and then suddenly, the booming stops.

Terra Proxima: The Lines are drawn OVER Mechanised assault unit.

I feel that Terra Proxima: The lines are drawn was certainly excellent, not a single grammar mistake to pick up and very interesting.

I feel mechanised assault unit was alright, but it was a bit linear and grammar errors were found.