Player Comments on Dog Life

This story, well, it has a lot of options…that don’t really go anywhere. I can really appreciate the vast number of options. I really like that your first selection really sets the tone for the story and takes you down one of the three paths. However, beyond that, the story is so short that there’s not only not much of a story, but no real options beyond that.

There were still choices there, but often the choices simply led to one ending or another ending without any additional story in between. Indeed, because of the branching on the first page, each story ends up being shorter than a recipe. As others have pointed out, this is a neat idea. This is good concept for a story. The branching at the start is nice and takes the story in a good direction: but then suddenly there’s nothing. This could be a lot longer and more detailed and turned into quite an effective story if more time and care were taken with the story, I think.

i like the dogs

This game was about dogs as the author mentioned. Other than that there really isn’t much else here. The options seemed pretty obvious and I think this story would have benefitted from a perspective of one dog’s journey with branching paths.

The grammar and presentation was fine I supposed see the main reason this got a low rated is the lack effort put into it. All it needed was a fattened up word count that maintained the quality of the writing and a more detailed plot.

This story just felt kind of random and it didn’t feel like my choices mattered to the overall outcome which was disappointing but hey dogs cute so I guess.

Short and sweet. Loved it.

Cute, but not very detailed. My advice: try to make your characters MEAN something, rather than just being there. Also try to add more options per page.

Got bitten by ants. Not surprising.

7/19, story didn't really go anywhere.

wuish it was longer but pretty good

This was a fun story!

It was really good, but too short.

It's a nice thought, but very short.

3/8

It was great! A little short...

It wasn't very long but it's ok and I rated it a 5 because it's good but maybe make it a bit longer next time as well as adding some more options

Aww.. This is cute

In my opinion I think it was fun. It was short but worth it to save my owner on option 3!

i love this i would love for you to put more options and pictures thank you

Had Fun

it was fun pretending to be a dog

Some of it was very nice. However, the endings are unreasonable. I also noticed that some things don't couldn't know...overall a okay story.

I liked it It is short and sweet

Short. And on one of the new tabs it is called Feild but Feild is actually spelled Feild, don't worry, we all make mistakes.

It was ok but very short. It was cute. Since it was more like a baby game I gave it a not the best and not the worst.

but first....... SQUIRRAL

While not very expansive, I absolutely love it. It is very cute, and I see a lot of potential. 7/8.

This was extremely short with not enough detail and no real goal. Most storygames have some kind of goal. Also, you don't have much of a choice.

Stay away. Far, far away. 1/8.

It's really cute

:)

Wow rlly fun!! :D I'm a golden retriever who caught 5 grasshoppers

I am a hero! A Cocker Spaniel with a medal! I would have preferred a treat.

I woulda got dat squirral...

its too short

That was better than some games I've played and I got a good ending wow! I think that's my first good ending......ever.

Meh, when little kids see that the Elderly lady die, there gonna bawl there eyes out like the man. CHANGE MATURITY LEVEL TO 2!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aww I love the cocker spaniel one

Cute, but plotless.

FUN FUN FUN!!!!

Cool asoume life saver Cootchi the Coker spanial!

Nice Shitzu story! COCKER SPAINAL TIME!!!

Nice concept, there's just not enough supportive backbone to the story to make it very meaningful.

Lots of choice's and a good amount of diversity

This is a great premise for a gamebook but it is simply way too short. The grammar is good but descriptions could be better.

It literally took 30 seconds.

Short

It was a good story, in my opinion, a little short, definetly didn't take me a lunch break! Less than half a minute(but I read fast, so…) and maybe a little longer? I like the idea of choosing your breed. That part was semi-interesting(because what's fun about choosing a breed) but that's not your fault. All in all, great story!