Player Comments on Food & Nutrition Quest

I couldn't tell if this was a piss take or real.

A good effort to turn a test paper into a story game but for me it was about as much fun as an exam. Good effort though, good use of photos and good writing = 3/8

too easy

The game was not very well thought out. Most of the choices in the beginning of the game had nothing to do with the birthday party. Also, we did not get a chance to see what Mel thought of her birthday dinner and if it helped her constipation.

BAD

what kind of 15 year old tells her friend she has constipation?
It's clearly intended for a class exercise, but it was very well-written, and kinda fun.

This is EXACTLY what I've been looking for! Not much game like this because not just ONLY about school its also about Educational too! (The Exercise and also Making Healthy Food) too bad not much game like this, And I also would like to have the ending more specific, 8/8!

it definitely is unique i think i've only seen one other story like this one. 6/8

Too short.

let me just buy a cheeseburger and a diet coke...oh wait..

It was fun

Boring...

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN .
DO MORE OF THIS .. (:

very interesting game and it's fun. definately better than homework

Not too bad,better than doing nothing.

i had no choice but to choose the healthier stuff.but it is cool,and nice

It is very fun and educating

Interesting, hope there's more of these games in the future :)

quite fun ah

good

I will take Home econ next year;D

It was fun and educational.

It was really good.
Well written, and wasn't too short.
Really like this one

Rubbish.

Easy and kinda fun too. I'm a big dessert fan so I picked decently healthy appetizer and main course foods (I think) and picked the chocolate cheesecake for dessert. After all, everybody deserves a tasty birthday cake no matter how unhealthy. Great spelling by the way! I liked it!

exellent

Cool I gave her n awesome birthday

5/8 It is more like a mutiple choice health "quiz".

This is honestly the first time I don't know what to think about a story. On one hand it sounds like it's right out of a health class, on the other hand there are next to no (if not no) spelling errors and you obviously spent a lot of time on it. 5/8

This seems to be usead as a learning tool. This tool can be the sharpest in the shed. I havn't thought about writing informative stories on here before I read this. You had helped me discover a new genre on this site :). Good job!

Very interesting and a lot of thought and effort goes into preparing it! :) enjoyed the activity! do you mind if we share this link with our students in the future?

Alone, each of the things this story offers are not desirable: the contrived dialogue, the health pitches, the fact that it was apparently made for some kind of class, the whole idea of home economics. But when you put it all together... it makes something beautiful, it really does. 6/8.

Not bad. 4/8 I like the idea of it, but cooking really isn't my thing.

love it!