Player Comments on French Revolution Prisons

What? So I accept the apple and make friends with some guy and that's it???

— TestingJest on 9/22/2017 5:00:01 AM with a score of 0

You either spend your life in a modern prison, die (somehow) or live in england with a random apple guy, not alot of choice

— Chickdove on 4/2/2017 12:52:02 AM with a score of 0

I don't get it. How's that supposed to be sci-fi? (apart from the time machine)

— derpybacon on 5/16/2015 8:46:46 PM with a score of 0

Not bad. Barely any spelling errors. looks like you put time in to this.

— Shinobi on 4/15/2015 7:06:40 AM with a score of 0

I like that the wrong choice in the beginning didn't immediately lead to failure (although it ultimately did).

— Boringfirelion on 4/13/2015 9:45:11 PM with a score of 0

Good for a school project. But overall....... it's not a good story in CYS. Sorry.

— Raven47 on 4/10/2015 7:12:50 PM with a score of 0

In regard to my last comment, I meant that you did not contrast the two prison settings in your game.

Though, it seems that I am mistaken and that there is a "modern prison" path. So, feel free to disregard that part of my previous comment.

— jamescoker1226 on 4/9/2015 9:25:05 PM with a score of 0

It takes quite a while to get to the actual "prison" part of the game, and the amount of detail is disappointing. There is also very little contrast between prisons during the French Revolution and prisons in the modern world.

Also, the use of the word "guns" on the second page immediately brings to mind modern firearms. You probably should've used a more specific or period appropriate term.

Still, this is a decent game with a fair number of different endings.

— jamescoker1226 on 4/9/2015 9:22:14 PM with a score of 0

It was just a quick easy thing for my class. If it was boring then I'm sorry for that, but I didn't really put all my effort into this short story game. :) Sorry!

— purplewibble on 4/9/2015 1:52:48 AM with a score of 0

For a school project it's not a bad contrast between prison then and prison now, though I guess there are pretty bad prisons all over the world :) For a school project I think this should score quite highly, for a choose your own adventure it's ok

— Will11 on 4/8/2015 8:38:10 PM with a score of 0

Sethanial you actual can get into prison, it isn't that hard to find

— AthenaT on 4/8/2015 7:33:37 PM with a score of 0

Very boring...

— Klanex on 4/8/2015 7:33:15 PM with a score of 0

I don't get it. The description says it's supposed to be about French Revolution prisons, but I played to multiple ends and never encountered one. If this is meant to illustrate the difference between modern prison and french revolution prison, it doesn't work.