I Am A Dragon

That was... Strange. Apparently humans are fireproof and getting disorientated results in dying of starvation. O.o

God damm it i had to play again to fix my grammar !
Thats it?

That's it's?

My guess is that maybe the human was wearing fire-proof armor? I can't decide on any rational reasons for his immunity!

Too short, not descriptive enough, bad grammar. I'd give you a 0 is I could, but sadly I can't. 1/8.

What is this shit? WHAT IS IT?

FIRE IMMUNE HUMANS TO BOOT WITH SOME OF THE WORST STORYTELLING IN RECENT MEMORY!

Where do you go?
>The Cave
There is a dragon there. Nooooo, you die.

That's pretty much half the "game". No, more. Like 3/4. or 5/8. Can't quite decide.

That coupled with no detail and more flawed logic (fire immune humans, as previously mentioned, and you, a baby dragon with minimal experience, being able to take down a whole team of dragons by "whacking them" and NOT being able to take down a SINGLE dragon trapped in a cave) makes this game not worth your time and something to be avoided.

Look, I'm sorry, but... wait, no I'm not. Un-publish this and rework it. Take more time, preferably more than 5 minutes, and add some meat to your game. It's great that your trying to start writing CYOA fiction, but it's NOT great that you think you can just post whatever you can throw together in 5 minutes.

Heck, if dragons aren't tickling your fancy any longer, try something new! Just make sure you have something of substance before you publish it.

Poor. I was hoping for something better than this.

This story was very poor, and it's a shame too, I really liked the opening.

I Am A Dragon follows the adventures (or misadventures) of a hatchling dragon as they spend their first days exploring a new land. The choices in this story vary from exploring new places to engaging in battles, and even choosing how you look. Sounds like a lot of fun, right? WRONG!

The amount of exploration in this story is just hideous. Every choice leads to a death scene or a game over. I played through the story twice, regrettably.

Please un-publish this story and work on it more. Add more details to the world. Add more descriptions of what places look like. Add more gravity to the choices. Give us some exploration!

I don't think humans would want to take on a dragon. And apparently humans are fire proof now?

There shouldn't be so many death options. I make a decision that's as good as any other, and then I die. Multiple times. If you're doing this because Endmaster does this, the difference is that his have a really good story to them.