Player Comments on Kill, Destroy

Not descriptive enough to be dark, not gross enough to be notable, not self aware enough to be funny, not serious enough to be creepy, and not interesting enough to be rated highly.

Not enough details to be a violent story, but it will gross out little kids.

So.....
Did I just become a Build-A-Bear?

I give you a 2/8 simply because you know how to construct decent sentences. I didn't like this though. You have no other choice but to kill the child, and the overall story made zero sense.

That was a wild ride.

Yey! I get to be a Build-A-Bear! ^_^

It's very odd, but the length is okay.

Ok, I got from the story's description this wasn't going to be a family comedy but your story's premise is repellent, your characters are repellent and I have serious doubts about you :) I am not sure what value this has except as a small amount of therapy for someone with a big amount of problems or as a gross-out example of how not to write. Even the other stories just as dark as this one explore the psychology of the character or possible reasons for the atrocities, this was just random.

It would help if the protagonist had an actual goal/purpose for his murder spree.

Never felt that way about being transgender before...