Player Comments on Mr. Crazy

Wow! This was bad but really funny!

This is the greatest game CYS has EVER seen. I love this game.

reeeeeeeally great!

You wake up ten years later at Mr. Crazy's personal burger king. He says hi and gives you a burger. after taking a bite, he mentions he dropped it in a toilet after using it. You then die.

lol

Wow!....bad

You kept my attention for two pages... then I lost. That's way to quick of a loss. 2/8

You'd think that tylerm13 would be an upgrade from "12herda" but evidently not. I guess this fully answers the question of is 13 better then 12? You know the question that keeps you up at night.

1/8 what can I say about this game? I can't even think of anything to say about. Bad spelling, stupid plot, stupid game.

Too many misspellings, no dialogue, characters, plot, or satisfying ending.

I killed that mutherfcker better then they killed Caesar. Woot! Horrible game...

Stories with a Play Length of 1 will often get bad ratings. Choices need to have an interest to the player, and not seem like random actions thrown into a mix of random situations. However, you did have a lots of choices to make, lots of things to do, which is better than just having one choice on a page, so you're heading in the right direction by doing that. So, you just need to work on writing a more interesting, less random feeling story, and try for a longer length so there's some more content in it.

Very childish. Once I did a book report on the bus that looked like this.

This is a pretty horrible story even for a first attempt. A little effort next time!

short and random

that had no point, there was grammar issues, and no plot. though it was semi silly.