Player Comments on Obsessive Love!

Aww, I love the Sweet Ending with James! He is such a sweetheart

Great potential, would encourage a visual at each different ending! Enjoyed it immensely for it was easy to read!

omg i loved it !!!!!!!!

Good

Great story

Até que foi bom

I love it

yes. i got bad ending and replay it real quick and now i got meself a husband and a child. nice.

More options would be great and also if you could elongate it a bit more. Also please note the different reactions. The end seemed to be sweet but there are people who might become freaked out and try to leave but can't because they are trapped by him.

OMG this was so good I loved it and the story line was amazing

Very nice writing, as well as proper grammar! The story has a nice flow to it, and the different types of endings are quite refreshing as well. My only complaint would be that it was, indeed, unusually short.

Maybe, could you write what happened next. Other then that, it was AMAZING!

I just stumbled into this and its not bad.

Pretty noice. Things move little too fast though.

I liked it! It was short, but pretty good for a first story. There aren't many yandere choose-your-own-adventure stories out there, so I'm glad you decided to make one.

The beginning was very sad and I felt really bad for the baby. But the end.... <3 :D

I loved this. It was amazing because of the amazing power of Yanderes! Love it!!!!!!!!!

I feel like you've grasped the basic concept of what you wanted to do, but then strung idea together in a pretty nonsensical way. Plus, it's hella short.

So few stories like this have an end where you accept the person's love rather than being horrified and getting killed a bit later. I like this sweet ending! :)

Love it ^^ it's really fun

Pros:
-Technically it's very well-written.
- The choices actually make a difference to the story.
Cons:
-no real "story"or plot to speak of, just a series of random events.
-The yandere aspect could be better developed. In every ending I've found, the guy abruptly confronts you with his love and that's pretty much the end. Yandere characters are clingy and possessive, you need more time in the story to emphasize the invasive overwhelming aspects of their love.

This was some weird kind of story,,and not in a good Way. No story whatsoever, no Why and how...oh no!

Cool story, short though. But now I understand the title though.

Well.. The bad ending is harsh.

I am gonna smack Daniel. I saved that baby and thus the baby is mine to love and to protect. I will kick his ass

I won't let him give me tea. . .

This story was simple, yet unique. Your writing style is fascinating. I liked every bit of it. Though it had faults, I gave it a 5/8 because of the writing. It was really well written. Great job! =)

The writing was pretty beautiful and the twists and turns a little startling but interesting, I like this idea that you never know what's around the corner and do we make our own fates or is everything pre-determined for us, we could have a stalker and not know it! For a test story I think it's pretty good and this idea could definitely be developed further (maybe we grow to like him? Maybe we discover we're an illegitimate child of royalty and that's why he likes us? Maybe's he's really a nice guy who just needs a friend? Anything is possible).

Fantastically written! But I want more of this awesomeness! I gave it a 7/8

I rated this a three, because:

This was a sweet, wonderful story, but with pros come cons. It was a tad short, most likely rushed. If you would take the time to write it longer, this would be a sweet, warm and loveable story.

3/8

Keep writing!

That was a wonderful story!! I loved it! And all the different endings! So fantastic! I LOVE IT!

This is gOOD