Player Comments on School Problems

... Depending on what path you take, this story is either mediocre or ... just unfortunate. If you're going to make a story that involves repeated child rape and poop jokes, you should at least have the talent to make it funny.

On the other hand, it's not warrior cats, so I'm sure a lot of people are willing to give it a pass regardless.

Haha. I found this amusing. I mean, you write well, but there just isn't a plot. I don't see the point in the story other than to entertain with... disgusting things.

You certainly could've given a reason why everyone was fat? HOW certain things happened. That could've enhanced the humor of the whole thing. I'd like to know the WHY and not just the "Everyone is fat, so laugh with me."

Still, you're writing is good, and I think if you wrote something with an actual plot, you'd do well. :D

Horrifyingly bad. I can't believe I just sat through this filth with my mind still intact. From the instant you click on the fateful word "Toilet", you know what you're in for.

This is not worth reading in any way...

Why hasn't this been deleted yet?

muahaha i got the good ending and became a billionare

Awful.

Good ending yay! But... Why were those "teachers" even allowed to be teachers?! Oh well. At least I became rich and now have a lifetime supply of money.

What the hell did I just read? This is... wonderful. Okay, it's not that good, but it is twisted, and I like that. :P

this story was like an accident, i didn't want to stare but just... could... not... look... away!
As weird and disgusting as it was, it was actually entertaining.

This kid has a bad habit of shitting on his teachers...

Perhaps it could use a few more good endings. I will keep that in mind. My next story will have more variety. -and maybe a little less vulgar content.

more options an no one dies

"Like - so unoriginal and junk, like my grandma can write better than this, like totally."

... You know, if you're going to leave a "bad" "review" on my story as an attempt at revenge for me being honest about yours, next time, try not to sound like a valley girl with Down's syndrome when you do it.

Your writing in that comment is a good example of the reason I take issue with your story. Uninteresting, lacking effort, poorly written, attempting to be offensive, and not even getting that last part right.

Brazenly offensive and brimming with scatological humor. The writing is not terrible, and I imagine if the author actually applied himself, he could write a good story.

*sigh* This just feels like a pathetic attempt to copy Endmaster. No class or finesse here, though. Fail.

Not sure about that Nazi thing. That was unnecessary.

A fun short story, good to waste 10 minutes on. Perhaps a little random and fast flowing, but nothing too drastic.

What is up with the poop? And why... oh why... does the principal have to do that...?

This really ought to be 7/8.

I feel ill.