Player Comments on The Apocalypse

okay

Bat pee... SERIOUSLY?

its ok mkay?

Meh. The grammar was definitely below average. Proofread, mate!

WOOHOO

so boring

brilliant i won YAY!!!

Joking you guys are not suckers, you guys are............ awesome and I love Zombie Apocalypse stories. Awesome=weird. Im weird.

I died when I looted his body, but then I got resurrected.

LIKABIGFATBOSS!!!!!!!!! YOLOSUCKERS!!!! joking.

I think you win no matter what but its still pretty fun!

i don't know what to say, but i definitely did not like this allright.

ughh awfull stupid ****

Horrible doesn't even describe this worthless piece of buffalo shit! It's horrible, starts off trying to be serious but ends up having the worst use of memes I have ever seen in a storygame. This worthless piece of shit gets a -8/8 (If that was possible)!

? wat?

troll game

IT'S OVER 9000!!!!
lol
A lot of memes and still is some-what enjoyable....

this was really funny and i loved the smart ass comments and bad ass attitude.
i love the funny pics too, cute!
the story itself was awesome keep up the good work!
Duhhhh.... (What do i say now?)*
BYE! ;)

the memes were silly and over used. might have been a good story if it was thought through and had proper spelling and grammar.

It's an OK story with very little plot or character depth. Also. way too many memes. It is semi-inbteresting, though. Play the game, and se if youlike it, readers.

Seemed like randomness for randomness sake, also several bugs, eg. I never found a chainsaw and it just gave me one on the next page.

I... Uhh... Do you have 164 friends or did you just rate your own game 164 times?

Enjoyable.

Meh. Excessive use of memes, moderately good spelling, poor grammar, lots of just straight up random things done in such a way that its just random for the sake of being random and not funny random. There were some broken links as well.

4/8

I like a logical order of events, I like it very much.

While I enjoy rage comics and AK-47s with incendiary ammunition as much as the next guy, this game doesn't do justice to them. Frankly, it doesn't make sense. There was one page in particular that made no sense, the one where you have the option to throw away the knife. I couldn't assemble the words on that page into any kind of coherent sentance. That said, I think you're on to something here, because you can never have too many rage faces and AK-47s with incendiary ammunition. If you took the time to put it in proper English, it could be damn good.

Nice

ok

I'll save rating it until later, because I'm hoping this is just an ultra beta demo.
While it has been said you deserve slightly better marks for the length of your story, to be honest, it looks like 2 weeks worth of computer class time to me.
I didn't find your use of memes funny, nor the pop-culture references. Judging from the comments so far, that's a minority view, so feel free to disregard that comment, just saying personally, the only replay value for me was to nitpick.
If you pad out the pages, to maybe two paragraphs a page, I still would only rate it a 5, if I was feeling generous. I don't mind the zombie genre, but there's humour and there's ADD cramming every in-joke you and your friends know.

Good, good. Some mistakes and improper grammar. Also a lot of made up words and too random. LIKE THE MEMES

wow i liek memes YAY!

Lol weired... lemme guess you got shane from walking dead...

awsome but i hate the ending... too random

wow it wuz good but you cuold've used less memes, better spelling and less randomness

lol it wuz funny like da memes

ZGood

If you actually use proper english, you would probably get a better rating

What the FUN?!

Nice

not as bad as some others, but it could still use work. using numbers in your sentences, and the extremely informal language were annoying, and the winning ending was random.

Grammar was terrible, random choices, and luck-based death links. On the bright side, aside from the grammar it looks like you put in a good bit of work and it's of decent length. 3/8

I know this is a zombie game, but dead links are not cool. Go back and make sure all your links actually connect to a page. Overall, it looks like you actually tried to make a decent game, so I'm rating it on the curve (I gave it a 3 compared to the recent rash of 1 & 2 rated games on the site). I don’t think everyone will be as forgiving, so fix those dead links as soon as you can for better ratings.

The grammar is generally ungood, some pages (like going to the "janitor room") are unfinished although I guess you already knew that because it's a beta but I still gotta mention it...and come on yo, even though we all know the stock zombie apocalypse opening, the intro is basically "gun to head ok now go kill zombies", you gotta have something COOLER than THAT. And I personally thought it was overly jokey too, what with all the memes and nonsense and whatever, and the "IT'S A REFERENCE TO A ZOMBIE MOVIE" part. Though despite me being caught between rating it a 2 and a 3, it wasn't horrid, so don't give up. Maybe you could add more graphic description of the rotting zombies!?