Player Comments on the biggest choice of all

I give you props for trying to write about a hard subject. It's not easy and kudos for trying. But there were some flaws.

The grammar was off at times and you kind of made it where I didn't have any choices. I was just given a situation and had to make the best of it. Also, you could have made the game better by adding a male point of view. It is not only women who are concerned about abortion and showing a guy struggling with this would have made this game really good, in my opinion.

3/8

— JMgskills on 7/10/2012 1:18:28 AM with a score of 0

It's ok but not the total best 7/10 is my rating

— hiya on 1/16/2017 8:26:28 PM with a score of 0

It was an interesting concept, but the story was illogical and there were no real choices.

— Duvilier on 5/30/2016 12:48:26 AM with a score of 0

The concept was interesting but the grammar and proper punctuation was bad.

— Penworth on 6/12/2015 9:12:14 AM with a score of 0

Apparently if I was a girl I'd be a real ho :D Interesting story but the grammar needs to be cleared up (mainly using capitals). Good realistic ideas though :)

— Will11 on 5/23/2015 1:36:32 PM with a score of 0

YAY FRIENDLY BOYFRIEND FRIENDLY BOYFRIEND!

— Wolfina on 4/30/2015 7:59:08 PM with a score of 0

Dull

— takogreece on 4/22/2015 10:24:21 PM with a score of 0

awesome so great

— crystal on 4/17/2015 8:46:21 PM with a score of 0

I honestly loved this story. It's got an absolutely amazing plot line, and I find it very realistic, and touching. My only issue is the CONSTANT spelling and grammatical errors.
7/8

— Mtactical on 1/18/2015 11:55:17 PM with a score of 0

I loved this, very beautiful 8/8

— bburger on 12/4/2014 5:47:47 PM with a score of 0

Very realistic

— jelly on 7/24/2014 9:46:33 PM with a score of 0

it is very sad and it can happen to anyone

— bob on 7/9/2014 8:37:37 AM with a score of 0

Lacking a bit in choices to be honest.....

— Sloe on 8/14/2013 9:24:49 AM with a score of 0

there were almost no choices... never again...
what if i didnt want a (spoiler) abortion?
theres no choice... it wasnt the biggest choice at all...

— veronika on 7/4/2013 8:31:30 PM with a score of 0

This is so damn stupid

— ceebee on 4/14/2013 3:03:05 AM with a score of 0

It's okay...

— ALG on 3/16/2013 3:35:55 PM with a score of 0

Seth says NO!!! I'm not a girl, and it was short, and you were forced to do things. 2/8 because i thought a 1 was harsh XD

— SethIsBeast on 11/7/2012 7:05:25 PM with a score of 0

good

— bells23 on 9/24/2012 2:16:58 PM with a score of 0

...*shrug* It was a good first try.

— Kiel_Farren on 9/16/2012 10:56:57 AM with a score of 0

This seemed to me more like a "what would you do in these circumstances" than a story with believable characters who have to make these decisions. There really weren't enough options to cover a range of circumstances, and I had a hard time either identifying with the characters, or finding options that would fit my life if I ever were to find myself in this situation

— estel on 7/10/2012 10:10:00 PM with a score of 0

1 word. Adoption

— awesome on 7/10/2012 11:39:55 AM with a score of 0

Not too bad, more choices and punctuation would be better

— Xt1000305 on 7/9/2012 2:44:40 AM with a score of 0

I don't like it when roles are forced upon the reader when they are the ones making the choices. The "choices" where more like this is how it is and you have no say. Nothing in life is that concrete. I suggest reading some other authors to get a better feel for the story weaving.

— alienalpha on 7/8/2012 11:32:42 PM with a score of 0

It was boring, you barely capitalized, and it was pretty linear. Most of your pages had very little content, so you could have probably combined a few in order to prevent the linear feel.