Player Comments on The Regrets of a Teenage Romantic

Intolerably linear.

Sorry, I didn't like this. =\

I really liked this. You are a good writer and this was a simple, yet entertaining story. Well done. Nice going on the virtual high five. :)

great

Virtual High Five was EPIC!

Loved it!

I really think this is awesome. I got Kathleen, and was like “No Erica for ME!!!” And I ended up scoring a happy life in England. Yay me!!!

It was what it was. Learn the difference between your* and you're* if YOU ARE (you're) going to continue to write. I would also like to point out its pop, not soda.

Excellent in bringing across the message "you never lose by loving, you only lose by holding back" As well as reminding people of the importance of being loyal and choosing your partner carefully, great game!

KOOL DUDE!!!!!
LOVE IT

This was a cute story. I particularly liked my virtual high five. Tee hee

The writing was good and I can't complain about the story, knowing what it was when I started, but (as with anything) development is important. For what it is, it's fine, but things can always be improved.

It's not bad, with rather good writing. However, I feel that it's too short.

I liked it! Was cute! You got the girls names mixed up in one of the endings though, might wanna fix that.

... Danielle -who-? >_> Keep track of your characters' names, dammit.

Cute.

I didn't think much of the game. I honestly love the fact that the author used very good grammar. I thought it was quite short, only a few options so it wasn't much fun. I suggest you make another, I can tell the author really has the potenial to write a great storyline and game. But make it a bit longer and make it have more options

pretty good

stupid

nice game

I took the sour path with dating, feel for it too soon! overall, good first story.. Some things need to be worked on. I'll play it again soon

1. Fix that link bro
2. spell check
3. elongate

Definitely short, and with a few errors both technical and grammatical. Still, there were some comedic bits that made it a decent read, especially considering the lack of length in general.

lol i got the freaking nose bleed because the journalism button wont go! tried the button in the start and it worked fix the buton

Oh, and that being said, I thought the story was pretty good overall, and if it wasn't for that error I would have rated it higher. I think you definately have potential.

I like how you're able to incorporate dialogue well, but I had one problem with it. The use of the word "fuck". I don't really have that much of a problem with the use of vulgar language in general, especially if the story is well written, but one thing I noticed was that you used fuck incredably often. On one page I even think you used it on every other line. That seriously took away from the value to me, it just kinda made it look slobby, you know? 3/8

When I choose English Literature first, and decline the date, the Journalism link doesn't work.

Pretty good. Liked it, and the grammar was sound.

cute idea, but the staying with your first highschool girlfriend for 60 years is rather unrealistic for a game, which is supposed to be about real life.

It's short, but I see potential in you. Using your own life experiences is a great way to create a story, but once it's over you have nothing else. And, this may just be my computer, but after I said no to Danielle, the 'Journalism!' link didn't work for me. But good job all the same (and try to tone down the cusses like f***)

This is a good little story to pass the time.

I would congratulate you but I knocked my monitor off my desk giving it a high five.

I like that it was long and there was some good detail. The story though was a little suspect(A plot just focusing on a guy trying to get a girlfriend could be considered realistic but loses it's touch after awhile.)And it was really short and not a lot of options to choose from. I did see some effort but maybe if you had more choices(Like for flirting or choosing where you picked your date spot) would have made the game more interesting.

3/8

it was a really short game, plus saying which one was the bad ending kind of made the choice a little easier. If you added more meat to the story and gave the reader a few more choices and a better arc than get the perfect girl you'll have a nice romance story on your hands