Player Comments on WTF??? game

End me already.

Pizza is power. Hopefully ya slap yourself upside your head, and get to writing a better game.

This is my second time playing this game. I clicked on the "Random" link and it led me to this. Really, you might as well write a storygame like ndfvgzs,rkmytgfmk by ArrowzWorrA. I liked that one more.

THIS IS A FAIL
A) A lot of the endings end with "This is a new page" and are boring
B) THERE IS NO HUMOR!
C) This game makes you mad at mythicdragon.

stay away , far far away

I agree with nearly everyone else. Poor attempt at humour with no real story makes for a poor game.

i don't understand it

This game has bad grammar and it made no sense. Just two slices of pizza and I die because I'm fat. Because it is a work in progress, please spell check, and put some effort in this!

I was doing this for the points, but...

I vomited on the first page.

I don't know how I made it past the other two pages, but I survived!

There is one word that describes this game perfectly:
Shit.

There were a lot of dead end links. Also, a lot of profanity but no substance.

1/8

Um, typing profanities and being completely random with little or no good humor does not make a good game.

Uh, for a WIP, it's pretty bad, could definitely use more than 10 words a page.

Uhh, nope, you can't edit after publishing. You have to unpublish it before you can edit it some more. That's why people don't usually publish their games before they're finished. :p