Player Comments on Your Birthday > ChooseYourStory.com

This was pretty cute... Some endings were rather 'interesting' to say the least, buuuut this was written quite well and was rather fun to read, despite this being rather short.

You obviously have a way with words ^^

— TharaApples on 11/11/2016 2:45:28 PM with a score of 0

I know you said you only wanted your girlfriend to read this but... Screw that! I want the point for rating it. You're a pretty good writer by the way, well done, I'm sure your girlfriend will love it. ^_^

— Briar_Rose on 1/10/2013 5:35:11 PM with a score of 0

itwasgood

— vngyuhcfhcf on 3/6/2024 12:27:27 AM with a score of 0

it ok

— 21workmanma on 1/11/2023 2:16:30 PM with a score of 0

Great!!! I’d like more like this.

— SexySilver on 11/2/2022 9:00:29 PM with a score of 0

Cool but I wat more detail on the sex

— Penny Jaylyn on 11/27/2021 12:49:20 AM with a score of 0

so me

— genevieve on 11/2/2021 6:29:36 PM with a score of 0

Its pretty noice

— WAHluigi on 2/24/2021 2:32:19 PM with a score of 0

Cheesecake passes as a better meal than omelettes, trust me.

— Zinthinial on 1/18/2021 3:55:24 PM with a score of 0

yes

— nonexistent on 10/9/2020 4:15:33 PM with a score of 0

needs to be more descriptive

— booboo on 3/12/2020 7:47:16 PM with a score of 0

It showed me the light

— dfgbdfbh on 12/3/2019 8:52:33 AM with a score of 0

cool game needs to be longer though

— rose4606 on 9/5/2019 9:42:30 AM with a score of 0

Good Job!

— Star014sky on 7/26/2019 10:50:29 AM with a score of 0

ummmmmmm it needs to be finished

— Jordyn_joylove03 on 6/6/2019 8:12:55 AM with a score of 0

I looooooooove this game it's so fun.

— Lizzie on 3/23/2019 10:56:50 AM with a score of 0

so romantic

— PrincessStarlight on 5/19/2018 10:35:44 PM with a score of 0

Lord, this was extremely cute. <3

I loved how you dedicated this to your girlfriend, and I'm sure that she's very lucky to have you. :3

— DiniTheWizard on 11/8/2017 8:22:56 PM with a score of 0

AWESOME with caps because it's good... Only a few grammar mistakes... But over all it's good!

— mmmmhmm on 1/16/2017 8:34:37 PM with a score of 0

Good

— magicchess29 on 11/4/2016 3:04:22 AM with a score of 0

boring

— laxkay on 9/19/2016 4:43:53 PM with a score of 0

This sucks

— Derp on 8/22/2016 9:51:54 AM with a score of 0

Terrible.

— Kate on 5/26/2016 8:02:38 PM with a score of 0

didnt know what fun was either... oh. and, WOLF

— thebigE on 4/24/2016 8:13:45 AM with a score of 0

very, VERY awkward

— thebigE on 4/24/2016 8:12:39 AM with a score of 0

Very well written. But yes, very awkward indeed.

— SonicTurboTurtle on 3/24/2016 2:57:33 AM with a score of 0

Was way too personal. Was this made for your girlfriend or something??? A warning would have been nice.

— Jeff Long on 1/26/2016 10:04:06 PM with a score of 0

unique

— kut52 on 1/26/2016 3:46:26 PM with a score of 0

This was pretty good! Very sexy haha. You should do more!

— Tropic on 10/22/2015 7:49:07 PM with a score of 0

OMG this melted my heart. I eish the both of you the very best of luck!

— ElyjuhhLuvaa on 10/7/2015 7:26:54 PM with a score of 0

Didn't know what 'fun' was at first, now I realize... .-.

— TwilightEdward on 8/25/2015 7:51:40 PM with a score of 0

Awkwardness is out of this world, in fact!

— MadHattersDaughter on 6/30/2015 12:03:13 PM with a score of 0

0.o

— Cloudflame on 6/2/2015 1:53:49 PM with a score of 0

A little mature. Say wolf if you agree

— Wolfina on 4/20/2015 5:53:18 PM with a score of 0

good game

— volped on 4/20/2015 8:45:21 AM with a score of 0

a very "fun" game. :P lol

— Zaguiza14 on 4/19/2015 2:28:08 PM with a score of 0

Awsome

— Lily on 3/31/2015 7:47:33 PM with a score of 0

You should rate the maturity higher. Because of those scenes...

— eileenthg on 3/7/2015 9:53:42 PM with a score of 0

Not bad

— Iceclanprincess on 1/19/2015 3:29:17 PM with a score of 0

Good

— kelsi on 12/10/2014 1:01:30 PM with a score of 0

it was crap....but good for being board.

— OnyxSpell on 12/4/2014 8:04:47 PM with a score of 0

I have to say, it was really funny to play, and the grammar+Spelling was on point for sure. I loved it.
7/8

— Mtactical on 12/2/2014 9:06:06 AM with a score of 0

good wish it could be longer

— maiya on 11/23/2014 1:36:41 PM with a score of 0

This was pretty fucked up...

— Malkalack on 10/15/2014 2:20:56 PM with a score of 0

it is okay i guess...

— nia on 6/24/2014 8:46:37 PM with a score of 0

i chose playng a game

— l on 6/19/2014 9:10:40 PM with a score of 0

It wasn't that great you could have more storys to choose from

— Brittany on 6/17/2014 10:56:21 AM with a score of 0

Very cute!! Your girlfriend is a lucky girl!!

— Mercedes on 2/26/2013 7:51:04 PM with a score of 0

Nice writing, I think its pretty sweet of you to do this too! If you ever decide to write a proper story... I think it will turn out great

— Xt1000305 on 1/13/2013 10:31:26 AM with a score of 0

Short but sweet :)

— disneydreamer1230 on 1/11/2013 8:43:21 AM with a score of 0

That was a bit cute, though...
It's kinda explicit.

Oh well, the cuddling or bed-n'-breakfast would be a nice gift for the special someone. :3

— ... on 1/11/2013 12:43:30 AM with a score of 0