Battlemage, The Reader

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The Veil

All your life you've had an uncanny ability. You always seem to win at games of chance; you've always known when to bet and when to fold. You've often convinced yourself it was merely luck or keen intuition, but strange events reveal there is something more going on. Others have found out about you and your talent, and some of them are not happy about it. They are after you, and you aren't sure what they're going to do if they find you...

 

This story is an entry for BZ's Summer Slam contest. It kind of rides the middle ground between the guidelines of super hero and spy. If you make it to the end, things get really weird, and if you pass through training, you'll know you got to the "true" end. How powerful you become will depend on what you do. For the first few chapters there are cheats and hints.

 

There are several achievements to obtain as you play. When the game ends your achievements will be listed. You cannot get all of them (without exploiting the game, that is) since there are a couple of mutually exclusive pairs, but choices you make will determine which ones you get.

 

Warning: In playing this story game you may encounter disturbing material, including deaths, accidents resulting in serious injury, terrified or injured animals, and graphic violence.


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Recent Posts

Saddest storygames out there? on 9/18/2017 2:28:25 PM
Is that the one with the evil lich queen? I never got the real ending. Care to spoil it for me?

BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/16/2017 1:56:18 PM
Anyway, I wish I had time to add a few more Achievements. Thought I had an extra day. I hope people at least play long enough to get the Prison Bitch Achievement. That or the Exit Only Achievement. I would dare say it's a first on this website. XD

BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/16/2017 1:20:45 PM
Some of them aren't finished being read according to the stat indicator. I'm guessing our stories suck that bad, huh? Hahahaha.

BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/16/2017 12:29:54 AM
The story has some background color formatting. Not sure how styles affect that.

BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/16/2017 12:02:24 AM
Thank you friend!

BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/16/2017 12:02:12 AM
Damn it wish I had one more hour to polish. Oh well.

BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/15/2017 11:56:43 PM
http://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-veil Forgot how to hyperlink, sorry.

BZ's Summer Slam Contest! on 9/15/2017 9:55:11 PM
Man I'm cutting it close. I thought we had an extra day. Foolishly assumed the hour didn't change even though the date did.

BZ's Summer Slam Contest! on 8/6/2017 8:19:14 PM
Put me down for 25, Your Evilness. Got one cooking that barely fits the contest description.

CYoA From Hitler's POV? on 6/4/2017 11:24:32 AM
As I said earlier, my motivations for the suggestion came down to the following dichotomy: (1) Make a Hitler game in which you play as a character who actively murders Jews and Gays and many others just because your character is an evil cunt. (2) Make a Hitler game in which you do not play as someone actively murdering Jews and Gays and many others just because the character is an evil cunt, but rather for some other reason (which a good writer would figure out). The entire fucking idea of making a game in which you play as Hitler is insulting and distasteful from the get go.