"A hitchhiking adventure you'll never forget"

It is a dark, dreary night. You are driving your family from Pine Grove Furnace State Park in Pennsylvania after a camping trip. As you are driving down a barren road in Boiling Springs not too far from the campsite, a dark figure stands out. He is signaling to you that he needs a ride somewhere. After pulling over, he goes to the window and says, "Get out of the fucking car!," in a tone defining that he is not to be messed with. 

Find out what happens next by playing this game. Constructive criticism is accepted. 

By the way, I kind of rushed while making this because my computer crashes on a regular basis. 

I will keep that in mind when I make the actual story (I haven't started yet). 

So this is just a sample of a story I'm in the process of creating.

It is a dark, dreary night. You are driving your family from Pine Grove Furnace State Park in Pennsylvania after a camping trip. As you are driving down a barren road in Boiling Springs not too far from the campsite, a dark figure stands out. He is signaling to you that he needs a ride somewhere. After pulling over, he goes to the window and says, "Get out of the fucking car!," in a tone defining that he is not to be messed with. 

So what should I improve on to make it better? What should happen next? Should I make this a reality?

I'm not exactly looking for any game in particular, but I guess Sci-Fi and whatnot. Just any good game with good replay value.