I'm working on my story now, and was wondering if anybody wanted to take a look at it to sort of tell me if I'm doing alright so far with it. I think I am, but I'm not the one who's going to be playing it lol.
Anyway, if anybody wants to take a peek at it and give me some advice on where I'm going with it, let me know. I only want to show a small number of people before it gets finished.
Also, keep in mind, I'm nowhere close to the end.