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BgirlStories

Calling Wolf People

4 years ago

Hi...

Yeah...

Uh...

Y'know that wolf story that has been sitting in my Storygame list?
I need some help adding realism, because I feel like it sucks at the moment.

If you think you could help, maybe tell me here or message me?

Mizal

Calling Wolf People

4 years ago
Yes wolf people, come right in. Pay no attention to the admin behind the curtain or the cleverly concealed lever-operated trap door beneath your feet.
BgirlStories

Calling Wolf People

4 years ago

Or the mastiffs by the door waiting to choke you or the traitorous other wolf people or the werewolves
Oh yeah it's full moon

COME RIGHT IN

Cricket

Calling Wolf People

4 years ago
I heard this is a good story you could take inspiration from.
BgirlStories

Calling Wolf People

4 years ago

I have taken inspiration from it already lol

Cricket

Calling Wolf People

4 years ago
Awwww, Mizal, you're an inspiration to the next generation of wolf enthusiasts! Kawaii
BgirlStories

Calling Wolf People

4 years ago

Yeah but it's not very realistic

1. Talking wolves

2. Two males getting along...

3. No. They won't share meals lol

It goes on and on

Mizal

Calling Wolf People

4 years ago
For real though, just read White Fang. Just warning you it'd be very difficult to do a pure animal story though, you've got to have characters with agency somewhere driving the plot, or there is no plot.
BgirlStories

Calling Wolf People

4 years ago

I know. It's very difficult.

I read White Fang last year. The movie's on Netflix.
But I don't like it. I always spot EVERY SINGLE difference from the books in movies, and it makes them kind of hard to enjoy....