One beautiful night you were walking home from a casual day at work when strange lights began flashing in the sky. The night camouflaged the alien ship as it swooped down closer, and closer towards you. Without even time to react a green light began to circle around you and a weightless feeling arose. Minutes later you were strapped down about to be probed.

Four possible epilogues!!!

Someone called my house while my Mom was out. I didn't pick up the first time, but then it rang again so I picked up. It was some guy doing an investigation or something, no other details. Apparently someone put me down as a contact, someone I don't even know at all. I told him I didn't know this woman at all and he said sorry for the call.

Just a bit curious if this happens often? I was a bit creeped out by it.

Wow, pretty amazing. You've done pretty well in capturing my emotions and smacking them around like an upset child playing with a toy, :P. That's a compliment, by the way.

Yeah, you're pretty spot on about Wilhelm and Raines being uneasy friends. 

I'll check out your story preview.

Thanks for the advice! One of my biggest errors in the past of writing was dialog. I struggled quite a bit with making the characters seem believable. I hope to beat that with this story. 

I don't yet have a title for this story, but it's somewhat of a prequel/test for the massive zombie CYOA I wrote about a few months ago. It's a lot smaller than the one the other one I plan to write. Unlike most zombie stories this one's main focus isn't on the zombies, but the characters and their struggle to survive/personalities. It has a small amount of decisions (about 4 each playthrough, not counting deaths.) However, each one impacts the story greatly. Here's a preview.

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BANG! BANG! BANG! 

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?Just curious what everyone thinks.

I have a few questions, what's the genre of this storygame? Love and Dating? Also, can you give a quick description of what's it about?

From the preview I can say that I really like your writing style, you use good detail and the story seems to have great potential in being very emotional and touching.

Senses Fail.

Are you fully caught up with The Walking Dead comic?

My favorite comic is probably The Walking Dead. I just started reading it and I love it. I'm also a bit interested in checking out Fables.

TV Show-Breaking Bad (however I LOVE Game of Thrones and the Walking Dead.)

Anime-Clannad After Story, hands down. I'd say it's better than Breaking Bad as well if you were to ask me which is better.